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Heaven's Abyss

Love’s KISS Our BLISS ABYSS trust THIS There’s nothing like love’s KISS, our BLISS fond- caught in heaven’s ABYSS, trust THIS bond. WRITE ME A TYBURN - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues January 21st, 2018

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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/15/2018 9:19:00 PM
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This is just gorgeous, Luloo, and why I'm always blessed when I open a poem of yours, no matter WHAT the form or theme ... my winner, right here! Blessings and congrats, Dear friend! :-) <3
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/3/2018 12:57:00 PM
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I think you can make any form gorgeous. Wonderfully penned Luloo, congratulations on your win!
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Jean Murray
Date: 2/2/2018 1:35:00 PM
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You have changed this restricted form into something so expansive. Just beautiful. Congratulations Laura.
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/1/2018 8:43:00 PM
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Laura, congratulations on this great piece :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/1/2018 8:10:00 PM
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Congrats on your romantic winner, Laura.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/1/2018 7:58:00 PM
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Yours was the most romantic, Laura. Congrats for your well deserved win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/1/2018 6:47:00 PM
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Nicely written, Laura. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 2/1/2018 6:03:00 PM
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Just one more reason why I admire your poetry! What a great mind you have!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 2/1/2018 4:56:00 PM
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Congrats on your placement, Laura, and a blissy kiss from me. Mwah! X
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Paul Callus
Date: 2/1/2018 3:57:00 PM
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A delightful heavenly kiss Tyburn, Laura! Congratulations on placing high! Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2018 2:21:00 PM
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Congrats, Luloo, on 2nd place.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/25/2018 12:08:00 AM
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very cleverly arranged, Laura. I sure enjoyed this one.
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Carole Duet
Date: 1/23/2018 9:09:00 AM
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Short, sweet and delightful. GL in the contest Luloo!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/22/2018 1:20:00 PM
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Beautiful theme and execution! Good Luck xxoo
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/22/2018 3:45:00 PM
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thank you Mike ;)-luloo
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Susan Ashley
Date: 1/21/2018 9:02:00 PM
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Oh so beautifully expressed Laura. An enchanting write. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/22/2018 3:45:00 PM
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many thanks sweet Susan :)-luloo
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Judith S
Date: 1/21/2018 5:00:00 PM
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Very nicely done Luloo! Best of luck! ~Judy
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/22/2018 3:44:00 PM
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thank you lovely lady ;)-luloo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/21/2018 4:28:00 PM
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Charming, Laura. Sweetly done.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/22/2018 3:44:00 PM
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many thanks sweet Line ;)-luloo
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/21/2018 3:56:00 PM
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clever tyburn Laura I am finding it quite a challenge to write this form for the first time!:-) hugs jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/22/2018 3:44:00 PM
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I also found it challenging, as this was my first time with this form. I never heard of it before, but I enjoyed the challenge. Thank you ;)-luloo
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Arturo Michael
Date: 1/21/2018 12:07:00 PM
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Our earthly kisses are in Heaven's abyss...Nice poem...All the best Laura
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/22/2018 3:43:00 PM
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thank you Arturo :)-luloo

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