Connie Marcum Wong Poet Free verse

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Heaven Sent

Heaven Sent

Slowly, dawn emerges with crimson rays,
Portrays its sovereign self amidst the hues 
As warmth endows its worth on seas of trees.
Waves of verdant growth glows in divine design
Where sylvan showers cap canopies with a
Transparent radiant rainbow arc’s blessing.

6-17-22

~Honorable Mention~
Bite Size Poem no.47 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Valsa George August 13, 2022 at 4:24 AM A lovely scene capturing the eyes and delighting the heart ! Enjoyed the majestic arrival of the dawn !

Valsa George August 13, 2022 at 4:23 AM A lovely scene capturing the eyes and delighting the heart ! Enjoyed the majestic arrival of the dawn !

Paghunda Zahid July 25, 2022 at 10:10 AM Imagery is awesome... The colour you painted with words are wonderful... Great write

Vladislav Raven July 19, 2022 at 11:38 AM Hi Connie, you bring dawn to life in such an excellently painted canvas with your flowing words of wonder. This piece of poetry was Heaven sent to your soul. Excellent work Connie. Hugs always ..... Mike.

Susan Ashley July 17, 2022 at 9:55 AM Dear Connie, your vibrant pen spills such lush and lovely imagery of the new day dawning.. "Heaven sent", indeed, and so is your inspiring artistry, captivating one's heart and soul. Warmest wishes and hugs, my sweet friend.. ~Susan

Joseph P. DiMino July 1, 2022 at 9:12 AM I had to revisit this beauty, Connie; you are in my prayers. Blessings my friend.

Christuraj Alex June 23, 2022 at 8:49 PM Great and beautiful scene painting. Congratulations! Connie Marcum Wong June 24, 2022 at 3:27 AM Thank you my friend. Blessings xxoo

Paula Goldsmith June 23, 2022 at 7:34 AM Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write. Love It. Today, be blessed with your win........... Connie Marcum Wong June 24, 2022 at 3:28 AM Thank you Paula. Blessings xxoo

Gordon Mcconnell June 22, 2022 at 9:29 PM Lovely pen Connie so insightful and filled with lovely imagery too. Blessings always,Gordon xox Connie Marcum Wong June 24, 2022 at 3:27 AM Thank you Gordon. I appreciate your lovely comment. Blessings xxoo

Timothy Ray June 22, 2022 at 4:11 PM makes me miss the verdant surrounding, a lovely walk with Thoreau if there ever was one Connie Marcum Wong June 24, 2022 at 3:26 AM Thank you for such a lovely comment Timothy. Blessings xxoo

Paul Callus June 21, 2022 at 10:02 AM Indeed, a heaven sent start to a new day has been given life thanks to your able pen, Connie. I can tell you're enjoying writing again! Sometimes a short hiatus can be very beneficial. ~ Warm regards, my friend // paul Connie Marcum Wong June 24, 2022 at 3:25 AM Thank you very much Paul. Blessings xxoo

Joseph P. DiMino June 21, 2022 at 5:33 AM Dawn has never before been more vividly actuated and gloriously on display. Lovely write!

Michael Tor June 20, 2022 at 7:37 PM Love this beautiful imagery created by your perfect words Connie. xoxo

Harry Horsman June 20, 2022 at 8:10 AM A majestic scene Connie, magnified with your wonderful poetry.

Andrew John June 20, 2022 at 2:30 AM Dawn dawns upon us in this piece, CMW. Thanks.

Jennifer Fenn June 19, 2022 at 8:53 PM What a gorgeous scene!

I Am Anaya June 19, 2022 at 7:21 PM I love the last line, Connie, this is so nice, it takes me away to when I once saw a double rainbow!

Robert Gorelick June 19, 2022 at 5:47 PM Mother Nature paints her sprawling canvas with her masterful, extravagant brush strokes. Lovely write. Robert

Joseph May June 19, 2022 at 6:01 AM Connie, I like how you topped off this lovely write with a rainbow...

Mike Gentile June 19, 2022 at 4:47 AM Connie, your early morning imagery does indeed inspire in its beauty !! It does feel heaven sent! What a fantastic bite size poem , Happy Sunday xxoo

Bill Baker June 18, 2022 at 4:33 PM Nice entry, Connie. I especially like the alliteration you've sprinkled into this poem. Good luck my friend, Bill

Rico Leffanta June 18, 2022 at 11:22 AM Lucky you live in rainbow land! A great entry! Aloha!

L Milton Hankins June 18, 2022 at 9:33 AM Beautiful images awakening a kind of joy in the reader. Good work, Connie.

Vijay Pandit June 18, 2022 at 5:52 AM Exquisite images succinctly delivered, Connie. Always a joy to read your poems.

Kim Rodrigues June 18, 2022 at 4:28 AM Lovely alliteration! sylvan showers cap canopies…

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