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Heaven Sent

Heaven Sent

Slowly, dawn emerges with crimson rays,
Portrays its sovereign self amidst the hues 
As warmth endows its worth on seas of trees.
Waves of verdant growth glows in divine design
Where sylvan showers cap canopies with a
Transparent radiant rainbow arc’s blessing.

6-17-22

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Bite Size Poem no.47 Poetry Contest
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Valsa George

Date: 8/13/2022 4:24:00 AM

A lovely scene capturing the eyes and delighting the heart ! Enjoyed the majestic arrival of the dawn !

Valsa George

Date: 8/13/2022 4:23:00 AM

A lovely scene capturing the eyes and delighting the heart ! Enjoyed the majestic arrival of the dawn !

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 7/25/2022 10:10:00 AM

Imagery is awesome... The colour you painted with words are wonderful... Great write

Vladislav Raven

Date: 7/19/2022 11:38:00 AM

Hi Connie, you bring dawn to life in such an excellently painted canvas with your flowing words of wonder. This piece of poetry was Heaven sent to your soul. Excellent work Connie. Hugs always ..... Mike.

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/17/2022 9:55:00 AM

Dear Connie, your vibrant pen spills such lush and lovely imagery of the new day dawning.. "Heaven sent", indeed, and so is your inspiring artistry, captivating one's heart and soul. Warmest wishes and hugs, my sweet friend.. ~Susan

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/1/2022 9:12:00 AM

I had to revisit this beauty, Connie; you are in my prayers. Blessings my friend.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/23/2022 8:49:00 PM

Great and beautiful scene painting. Congratulations!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/24/2022 3:27:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Blessings xxoo

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/23/2022 7:34:00 AM

Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write. Love It. Today, be blessed with your win...........

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/24/2022 3:28:00 AM

Thank you Paula. Blessings xxoo

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/22/2022 9:29:00 PM

Lovely pen Connie so insightful and filled with lovely imagery too. Blessings always,Gordon xox

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/24/2022 3:27:00 AM

Thank you Gordon. I appreciate your lovely comment. Blessings xxoo

Timothy Ray

Date: 6/22/2022 4:11:00 PM

makes me miss the verdant surrounding, a lovely walk with Thoreau if there ever was one

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/24/2022 3:26:00 AM

Thank you for such a lovely comment Timothy. Blessings xxoo

Paul Callus

Date: 6/21/2022 10:02:00 AM

Indeed, a heaven sent start to a new day has been given life thanks to your able pen, Connie. I can tell you're enjoying writing again! Sometimes a short hiatus can be very beneficial. ~ Warm regards, my friend // paul

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/24/2022 3:25:00 AM

Thank you very much Paul. Blessings xxoo

Joe Dimino

Date: 6/21/2022 5:33:00 AM

Dawn has never before been more vividly actuated and gloriously on display. Lovely write!

Michael Tor

Date: 6/20/2022 7:37:00 PM

Love this beautiful imagery created by your perfect words Connie. xoxo

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/20/2022 8:10:00 AM

A majestic scene Connie, magnified with your wonderful poetry.

Andrew John

Date: 6/20/2022 2:30:00 AM

Dawn dawns upon us in this piece, CMW. Thanks.

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 6/19/2022 8:53:00 PM

What a gorgeous scene!

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/19/2022 7:21:00 PM

I love the last line, Connie, this is so nice, it takes me away to when I once saw a double rainbow!

Robert Gorelick

Date: 6/19/2022 5:47:00 PM

Mother Nature paints her sprawling canvas with her masterful, extravagant brush strokes. Lovely write. Robert

Joseph May

Date: 6/19/2022 6:01:00 AM

Connie, I like how you topped off this lovely write with a rainbow...

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/19/2022 4:47:00 AM

Connie, your early morning imagery does indeed inspire in its beauty !! It does feel heaven sent! What a fantastic bite size poem , Happy Sunday xxoo