Heart Song

Tears of joy tears of pain Years avoid the purple rain Melodies haunting my brain Riding me like red train Satin tears gently fall I can’t feel win or loss Is my muse real or fake Writing truth on white page Soak my ears in it Cloak my fears against it Taint teal tears with it Paint pink years win it Music muse toys with me Giving views taking blue sleep Are you in a holy heart space Are you friend or foe today Heart song so strong Carry on day night long We all sing for we belong Dreams or screams a heart song.

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Gerald Dillenbeck

Date: 10/21/2023 9:07:00 AM

Appreciate you, what you do, thanks for visiting my polycultural zoo, too.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/21/2023 9:26:00 AM

Hugs love and light to you Gerald for visiting.

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/18/2023 4:24:00 PM

Karen, your poem is absolutely stunning. The way you have crafted the first and last stanzas to have the same rhyme scheme adds a sense of elegance and depth to your words. It is clear that you have poured your heart and soul into this piece, as it evokes such powerful emotions. Please continue to grace us with your talent, my dear friend.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/18/2023 5:28:00 PM

Your embrace of my humble poems inspires me to grow. Thank you for encouraging words dear Sotto.

Valsa George

Date: 10/17/2023 8:37:00 AM

Karen, this poem is so beautiful with its first and last stanza monorhyming and expressing poignant feelings. Keep writing dear friend.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/17/2023 9:18:00 AM

You are kind in your comment Valsa thank you.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/16/2023 2:18:00 PM

I sincerely liked this poem, Karen. The words were emotional as your poem sang it's own heart song...Sara

Karen Jones
Date: 10/16/2023 2:39:00 PM

Thanks Sara.

Silent One

Date: 10/16/2023 11:54:00 AM

Nice rhymes in your emotive words..

Karen Jones
Date: 10/16/2023 12:44:00 PM

Thanks for reading.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/16/2023 10:47:00 AM

I really enjoyed this wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away.....................

Karen Jones
Date: 10/16/2023 11:09:00 AM

Thanks Paula! Love and light hugs to you!

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/16/2023 9:42:00 AM

Hi Karen, I can relate to your “ hearts song”. Continue to be you and write your truth. It's my pleasure to get to know you through your poetry:-) Alexis

Karen Jones
Date: 10/16/2023 9:59:00 AM

I look forward to doing the same with your poetry Alexis. Thanks

Michael Maul

Date: 10/16/2023 9:19:00 AM

Great writing

Karen Jones
Date: 10/16/2023 9:58:00 AM

Thanks Michaels hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 10/16/2023 6:44:00 AM

I love the mellifluous flow of your lyrical lines so well crafted with colors and rhymes! So touching and captivating as always! Heart song so strong here i see! Well done , A fave for me

Karen Jones
Date: 10/16/2023 8:40:00 AM

Ink Empress I am honored you faved and touched by your warm comments. Thanks for reading my heart's song and adding to the music your words. :0) Love and light to you. Hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/16/2023 5:36:00 AM

You write in such a flowing manner. Rest assured you will always be my friend. Blessings.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/16/2023 5:42:00 AM

Victor you touched my heart with those tender words. Thank you for being a friend I will always treasure. Love and light hugs to u.

Deb M

Date: 10/16/2023 5:29:00 AM

Heart song is the sweetest most powerful of all Karen! I love your words here! Debx

Karen Jones
Date: 10/16/2023 5:32:00 AM

Aw Deb you are so kind to say that! Thanks you. Love and Light hugs to you!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/16/2023 4:19:00 AM

we all sing for we belong, we all write because we belong, be strong my friend, keep sharing, I'm listening with my heart :)

Karen Jones
Date: 10/16/2023 4:25:00 AM

You have the biggest heart. Thank you dear poetess for listening. Love and Light to you!

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/16/2023 3:15:00 AM

song of the heart is always alive to enlighten the internal spirit of human; nice to read you; enjoyed truly

Karen Jones
Date: 10/16/2023 3:20:00 AM

Mahtab I appreciate your kind comments! Love and light to you!