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heart monoku

over his eyes on mine as warm as summer's night . . . my heart leaps the moon

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thriveni c mysore

Date: 5/7/2025 9:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

P.M. Richter

Date: 7/27/2023 2:17:00 PM

I love it ~

Terry Miller

Date: 7/17/2023 2:58:00 AM

Love this, a well-deserved win, congratulations.

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 7/16/2023 5:53:00 AM

Nice romance... The magnetic eyes...pulling till to heart. Congratulations on your win...Andrea.

Jcb Brul

Date: 7/15/2023 7:38:00 AM

Very romantic! Congratulations! Thank you for participating in the contest. Blessings. ^___^ JCB

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/15/2023 7:11:00 AM

Delightful! Congratulations, Andrea!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/15/2023 7:05:00 AM

Great imagery:)

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/14/2023 10:31:00 PM

Oh my, my! Beautiful! Warmest congratulations on your win, Andrea

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/14/2023 9:59:00 PM

Leapt over the moon - wonderful monoku. Congratulations!

Bill Baker

Date: 7/8/2023 4:48:00 PM

A romantic Monoku, Andrea, I like it. Bill

Terrell Martin

Date: 7/8/2023 12:49:00 PM

I wish I could write a one-liner like that! For that matter, I wish I was young enough to find romance like that again as well! Thanks for reminding us what true love is all about, Andrea. You keep us all young at heart with thoughts like these. Write on, Terrell

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/8/2023 9:53:00 AM

Nothing more beautiful than loving relationships. Love is paramount of all that exists. Truth!

Miranda Hawley

Date: 7/8/2023 6:10:00 AM

That is a romantic one liner.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/7/2023 10:31:00 PM

So romantic. Ah I'm past the age of love now. Hugs.

The Situation

Date: 7/7/2023 4:52:00 PM

The reaction I'd expect. When love is expected. I'm on a romantic roller coaster.

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 7/7/2023 12:46:00 PM

Hi Andrea, Passion is conveyed in such a short form. Enjoyed

Jay Narain

Date: 7/7/2023 11:39:00 AM

Ha ha, Very romantic.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/7/2023 11:24:00 AM

Hello Andrea, This is very romantic. Hugs. /Darlene\

Mike Bayles

Date: 7/7/2023 6:42:00 AM

Very nice, Andrea, and surprising.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/7/2023 6:05:00 AM

Ahhh!! Romantic. Sad, but my heart only leaps from arrythmia. Thanks for sharing this creative one and for dropping by my page. Sara

Lin Lane

Date: 7/7/2023 5:37:00 AM

Your Monoku is of a beautiful summer memory and of the boy you will never forget. You write of him often, so he still lives in your heart. That first love is not something you should ever let go.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/8/2023 9:02:00 PM

You got it, Lin!