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Heart Arresting Beauty

Discretion tells me I should turn my eyes away,
but with mouth agape I cannot help but gaze 
upon the heart arresting beauty now before me.
Why does she not shy away or attempt to conceal
the ravishing bouquet of her all from my stare?
How could she not notice me just standing there?
Does she not see me or does she simply not care?

She's a vision sightless eyes would yearn to see,
a goddess beyond the scope of man's conception.
Her flowing sparkling auburn hair whispers 
eloquently to her beauty in the warm breeze
occasionally hiding one of a huge pair of 
opulent all to consuming brown eyes.
Her visually captivating voluptuous body
would anguish a master Renaissance artist
for no brush strokes or mixture of oils
could quite capture the essence of her design. 
Those perfectly shaped succulent milky white...

Oh!  Why does that accursed demon's tormenting ring   
always awaken me just before I get to the best part.  

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/29/2013 11:16:00 PM
Haha, lovely poem, can imagine all the males reading hurriedly your words and groaning....Seren
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Kim Morrison
Date: 5/30/2013 4:08:00 AM
I was hoping to make men groan and women laugh with this one. I could have continued my description on down to love's oasis, but I do believe I would have needed a different ending. Thank You! Glad it gave you a laugh! Kim
Date: 5/26/2013 9:39:00 PM
Hello Kim, I will read your blog tomorrow from work. about your poem: I know the feeling, something always seems to interrupt such dreamy dreams... , Have yourself a beautiful Memorial Day, this Monday. God bless * Always~ LINDA
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Kim Morrison
Date: 5/27/2013 4:29:00 AM
As always thank you for the compliment. I was having fun being a tease with this one Sometimes I just need a break from the stronger themes I usually write about. You have a wonderful Memorial Day yourself. KIm
Date: 5/26/2013 7:19:00 PM
That was the best part! Randy
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Kim Morrison
Date: 5/26/2013 7:38:00 PM
It was and if I had kept going the only one that would have published this is Larry Flint. Ha!
Date: 5/26/2013 2:43:00 PM
Rhapsodic in content and form... Awesome lines arrest the senses; well done!.:) huggs
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Kim Morrison
Date: 5/26/2013 4:44:00 PM
Thank you! Nette
Date: 5/26/2013 9:38:00 AM
- Beautiful poem, Kim! - Thank you - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Morrison
Date: 5/26/2013 4:44:00 PM
Always love your comments! Thanks Anne Lise
Date: 5/26/2013 5:56:00 AM
;) What an amazing ending to this tale! Yes...that ring has been a problem many a time! Glad you had a lovely dream, Kim. Great write.
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Kim Morrison
Date: 5/26/2013 10:05:00 AM
Ha! Ha! Well I could have went beyond the best or the breast part, but if I had moved down to love's oasis I would have had to completely change the ending. Kim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/26/2013 9:04:00 AM
Just before you get to the best part or the breast part.....;-)
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Kim Morrison
Date: 5/26/2013 6:05:00 AM
Yes, it certainly has been a problem. Thank You Eileen I always appreciate your comments. I thought about calling this one dream girl or something like that, but I did not want to give away my cute ending.