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Harvest Moon O're Withered Fields

Daniel Henry Rodgers

This is the 4th installment of my Halloween series, with one more to be released on Halloween. 

"In the morning twilight of a village mist, hope flickers like a jack-o'-lantern's grin, while shadows of decay lengthen across withered fields." Daniel Henry Rodgers

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...the village shivers a hive of restless souls skin pricklin' with anticipation as costumed runners fixin' to gather — hearts a-thrummin' like trapped hummin' birds the gun cracks — a thunderbolt shatterin' th' autumn calm bodies surge forward, a mighty flood of desperation hopes misplaced, yet unyieldin' jack-o-lanterns leer from yonder doorsteps their hollow grins like flickerin' owls in the wind Willow, once a saplin' in Tom's arthritic hands now a gazelle with muscles coiled 'neath sun-kissed skin her grandad's voice -- a steady compass urgin' her through the storm Tom — roots planted in war-torn soil comrades' names etched in the lines of his face time-worn joints creak like rusty hinges each step a battle 'gainst the relentless tickin' his heartbeat once steady as war drums now falters Don limps —his plastered leg a cruel anchor dreams splintered like his tibia on black ice the antiseptic's ghost permeates th' air sterile corridors perfidious prognoses Jenna — wrapped in a year's bounty her body ripplin' with the weight of wet unfallen leaves bitterness thickens on 'er tongue her body — a prison of comfort food midnight binges an' unanswered hunger her pulse races t'ward a frantic countdown Jim and Christa — hands held tight bound by love, tethered by illness her body — a war zone his touch — a fleetin' balm chemo's sour scent clings like death's perfume their future — a handful of stol'n moments pensive prayers slippin' through fingers the young couple drunk on youth's sweet wine blind to shadows lurkin' just beyond their laughter lingerin' in the October chill oblivious to th' stopwatch siphonin' their joy four hours: the clock ticks — a heartless god each second — a heartbeat a breath a life inchin' closer to th' edge empty shelves vapors of scarcity bandages pills precious as gold dust the road stretches — a ribbon of fate frayin' rough asphalt and dirt-laden trails bite at soles air thick with decay windin' through fields of withered crops and unspoken fears fall'n leaves crackle underfoot a dissonance of decay th' air grows thick with rottin' apples an' smoke curlin' from distant fires Willow flies — feet barely grazin' earth Don grits 'is teeth, determination poolin' in 'is sweat Jenna's lungs blaze, a wildfire in 'er chest Jim and Christa — hands linked: fragile butterflies in autumn's cruel wind the finish line looms a threshold to salvation or damnation the clock's hands whirl cheers erupt as the first cross th' line relief an' joy mingle like incense in th' air but as the fourth-hour tolls a sound shatters th' sky gunshots echo in th' distance a harvest of a different kind Willow crumples victory hollow her grandad's absence an ache in 'er chest his 'eartbeat forever silenced Jim's triumph dissolves to ash Christa's silence — the final quiescence — deafenin' Don and Jenna — stranded behind their bodies plumb worn an' unwillin' betray them one last time the village keens — a shared grief for more than fallen leaves October's cruel harvest reaps deeper a rendered toll survivors freeze realization dawnin' like a blood-red sun this race was never just about time or fleetin' glory in th' distance, gunshots punctuate th' autumn air a s t a c c a t o rhythm of finality of lives extinguished Halloween mask slips revealin' the raw face of terror carrion-hungry vultures circlin' above waitin'... voracious for the weakest final heartbeats fade... like distant drums as decay’n guttural gunshots grate across th' withered fields...

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Date: 11/1/2024 9:36:00 PM
Dear Daniel, I just bow down in humility before you the great bard. You took my breath away! Each day I feel happier to see greater exhibition of talents in this remarkable poetry website. Though can never dream of writing like this, I have the fortune of reading such remarkable poetry. Each line and each character sinks deep into mind. The image of two pairs- "Jim and Christa — hands held tight bound by love, tethered by illness her body — a war zone his touch — a fleetin' balm chemo's sour scent clings like death's perfume their future — a handful of stol'n moments" . Then the young couple "drunk on youth's sweet wine blind to shadows lurkin' just beyond their laughter lingerin' in the October chill oblivious to th' stopwatch siphonin' their joy" Striking images. No one can read this without feeling choked in the throat. Altogether a soul shattering Halloween macabre scene
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Date: 11/4/2024 7:27:00 AM
Dear Valsa, You always have outstanding comments and insights, and I will always be appreciative of your visits. It took a little while to create the various characters and the reasons why they succeeded and the reasons why they failed. Those failures brought dire consequences that were truly life-threatening at times. Thank you, and I am so grateful for your visit. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 11/1/2024 8:15:00 AM
Such prowess! Quote is great. Scary first verse then the second makes us sit up and take notice. their hollow grins like flickerin' owls in the wind… their bodies plumb worn an' unwillin' betray them one last time… Interesting, the characters and their various ailments. Right now I’m in an aircast for a strained calf and my other knee hurts on the stairs…oh the angst…lol. With God we get through this life xx
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Date: 11/4/2024 7:23:00 AM
Dear Kim, Thank you and I hope your leg heals quickly. I wanted this poem to be about real people dealing with real issues that keep them from reaching the goals that have life consequences. Halloween allowed me to make it more terrifying consequences for those who never reach the goal. Get Well Soon! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/31/2024 7:55:00 AM
I feel the verse that Jim and Christa 'the young couple drunk on love's sweet wine.............. oblivious to th' stopwatch siphonin' their joy' is an important verse as it explains and heralds the monstrous chaos that ensues. Jack-'o-lantern's grin resembling the flickering of hope ' in the morning twilight of a village mist' is synonymous with evil. Halloween, what an incredulously wicked night for evil to give fright. Fabulous write, Blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 11/1/2024 5:38:00 AM
Dear Jennifer, Wow, you did feel the words and scenes from my poem. That gives us poets the greatest joy when someone deciphers all that is going on. Thank you for all your support and excellent comments. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/31/2024 4:21:00 AM
Dear Daniel, I read this twice and every time i read it i am impressed by your careful and creative choice of words~ woven here in such eloquence.. its so very dark spine tingling and soulfully moving how you’ve written one that is deep and touching too. While also ensuring that the halloween vibe stays intact! I especially love the lines “ her body — a war zone his touch — a fleetin' balm chemo's sour scent clings like death's perfume their future — a handful of stol'n moment pensiv” made me feel so much and in such a strong manner youv delivered every line! So powerful! A fave this is as i love halloween, and I couldn’t dress up this year but reading this made me feel it and felt the mood strongly! Your use of alliterations and so many poetic techniques makes this a sumptuous one worthy of all the accolades! Sending you light today and always
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Date: 11/1/2024 5:36:00 AM
Dear Empress, It is sad that Halloween has passed, but I enjoyed writing the five poems for this season. It allowed me to pull out some of my darker creative spots. I always love reading your insights into my poems, and it gives me a sense that someone truly understands what the words and thoughts convey. This year, I dressed up as a character from Harry Potter. I was from the house of Ravenclaw, but no particular person. Now it will be a whole year before we return to celebrate this day. Nonetheless, I look forward to Thanksgiving, December Holidays, and New Year's. Empress, thank you for being a wonderful reader of my work. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/31/2024 3:17:00 AM
Alliteration, metaphors and imagery are all constructed to show a tragedy in this world. Now we have to contend with N. Korea. Evil, too much evil.
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Date: 11/1/2024 5:28:00 AM
Dear Victor, I agree that there is too much evil in the world, and they are making choices that affect us all. It is always a pleasure to read your comments. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/30/2024 7:50:00 PM
Wow so many lovely DARK images. What an October harvest!!
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Date: 11/1/2024 5:29:00 AM
Dear Andrea, It sounds like you have the overall message; I am grateful for that. Sometimes, I wonder if I am getting too deep. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/30/2024 11:25:00 AM
Fascinating, deep and dense. Great lines, " comrades' names etched in the lines of his face". I'm not sure I understand it, but it sounds like the grim reaper is making his rounds.
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Date: 11/1/2024 5:27:00 AM
Hello David, LOL! Thank you for your comments and insights into my poem. My son-in-law read it and had many questions that allowed me to get behind the scenes. I told him many clues were taking place, and you realized that food and medical supplies were scarce. Because of that, the village government decided the best way to eliminate the weak was to have a grueling race with a completion time. Those who didn't make the time were eliminated and harvested. I will leave it there. Thanks again for visiting. Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/29/2024 9:18:00 AM
In Malta, we don't care much for Halloween. Your poem is great, though, and it is full of scary festivities.
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Date: 11/1/2024 5:21:00 AM
Dear Victor, Malta is one of the places I would love to visit when I retire next year. Thank you for coming by and leaving your comments. I feel many of the inspirations for these poems come from the Books of Daniel, Ezekiel, and Revelation. Knowing their words are real and mine are just fictional makes their stories even more intense and horrifying. Thank you, and it is always a pleasure to read your comments. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/29/2024 4:18:00 AM
You have outdone yourself Dear Daniel on this haunting Halloween macabre poem. Runners seem to carry their injury, illness and age in a dark suspenseful trip ‘peppered’ with leering Jack-o-lanterns and decays becoming and elegy or a dirge for lost lives and raw terror , is it war? ? I can almost sense the rotting odour, the cacophony of a celebration turning to horror. I think we have to crown you the King of Macabre. Hugs Maria Ps send me the address of this village so I can keep well away Lol
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Date: 10/29/2024 4:42:00 AM
Dear Maria, LOL!! When I wrote this poem, I thought that it had to have enough clues to give hints to what is actually going on but also leave enough space to allow the reader to build their own thoughts and conclusions. Thank you, as always, for your wonderful insights and thoughts. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/29/2024 3:28:00 AM
"Halloween mask slips revealin' the raw face of terror" -- Yep, indeed. The terror without a reflection of the terror within. We are, by nature, a trauma of masks and conflicted postures. Lots to think about in your fine poem.
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Date: 10/29/2024 4:39:00 AM
Hello Joe, Thank you for your insights into my poem. There was a Twilight Zone where an old man was dying, and he required all his relatives to wear a mask that he had chosen for them until he died. When they removed the masks, their face retained the same image as the mask. This story integrated a little of that thought into the lines. Thanks for reading and leaving your comments. Autumn Blessings, MY Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/28/2024 5:54:00 PM
A very scary story for Halloween Daniel, one can feel the fear of those running for their lives before becoming victims of terror. Another interesting horrific read… Enjoyed dear friend, Beryl
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Date: 10/29/2024 4:36:00 AM
Dear Beryl, Thank you for your visit and your motivating comments. It is a fascinating time of year for me to write some stories that might not be written at other times of the year. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/28/2024 4:14:00 PM
This is a scary story. Was Willow chosen, or doomed from the start. Definitely this story has the chill of autumn. It is a very appropriate, albeit horrifying, Halloween tale. Thank you for your great story telling talent, Daniel.
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Date: 10/29/2024 4:34:00 AM
Dear Hilda, Willow was young and vibrant and could easily trek the course in the allotted time, whereas her grandfather could not. It is sort of a juxtaposition between youth and age and Willow's helplessness in being unable to help her grandfather. Thank you for your wonderful comments! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/28/2024 2:05:00 PM
Interesting lines penned. I think you captured so much of the scary part of Halloween like the movies that play this time of year. Thanks for sharing..Sara K
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Date: 10/29/2024 4:30:00 AM
Dear Sara, It is quite interesting to see all the influences we, as poets, integrate into our writings, including other poems, books, and scary movies. Perhaps it is a safe fear and not a real world. Our awesome God is our joy and salvation; He left us his word with some really scary realities written in it. Thank you for your ongoing support of my writings, and I appreciate your thoughts. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/28/2024 11:28:00 AM
WOW!!! Part 4 with another wonderful write/story/picture. Your pen will need a vacation after the 5 part. It sure has been working overtime. Hahaha!!! Have a wonderful Autumn day writing away................
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Date: 10/29/2024 4:25:00 AM
Dear Paula, These 5 poems were written over a 6 week period before Halloween. Even before posting, I found myself editing and clarifying, which is part of the great joy of writing. Thank you for reading and commenting. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/28/2024 11:19:00 AM
If I was a Trick-or-Treater, there's no way I'd go out after reading this, Daniel. I looked at the picture before reading, read your introduction and then stared at the picture for some time trying to imagine the people you mentioned among the runners. I'm left wondering, were they running in hopes of winning a prize? Perhaps life. Were they running from those with guns. A harvest of people. A fine job you've done at mastering the art of leaving your poetry open to interpretation. Excellently written.
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Date: 10/29/2024 4:23:00 AM
Dear Lin, This one explicitly leaves the reader thinking about what happened. Hopefully, many clues inside this poem lead to some conclusions and open-ended other areas for contemplation and thought. Thanks, Lin, for all your comments and support. I am always appreciative. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/28/2024 11:15:00 AM
Daniel, you have pulled off the mask of life's masquerade to reveal through relationships both its glory and its terror. Your poems always take me into a place of the mystical heartbeat and enigmas begging to be explored! Must be the musician in you who sees beyond the surface! This is quite marvelous - as always, dear friend. Thank you for sharing your artistry and talent - your ministry! Sending you blessings!
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Date: 10/29/2024 4:19:00 AM
Dear Sam, It is always a great joy to read your comments and I am very thankful. Thank you for all your support and have a wonderful week as the last days of October are upon us. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

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