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swaying reeds chiming with the breeze as silver branches dart strumming a dream, at will, beneath harps of light rainfall pours like a fluid spout… in this sacramental space, quiet stalls and a single cypress stands guard allowing stars to roam along the marsh, here, candles pray for soothing grains interlude of night tucking eyes of blue earth... and then to rest, to sleep, to dream
copyright © ’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’ CONTEST: Brian Strand for Showcase of Verse.... BY: nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/11/2011 3:31:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on your top win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/11/2011 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Nette in Brian's latest contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2011 11:17:00 AM
Soooooooooooo beautiful, Nette. Many congrats on your FIRS PLACE WIN, Lainie
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Date: 7/11/2011 11:15:00 AM
Congrats Nette on your first place win with these elegant lines luv.. oh wow one..again..
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Date: 7/1/2011 7:53:00 AM
Another excellent write here Nette...very creative...best wishes.
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Date: 7/1/2011 6:13:00 AM
dear nette, above superb grasping the mind into my favs love you always and forever, your liege...harry soup mail call
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Date: 7/1/2011 3:13:00 AM
sounds lovely babe, shangrila, peace n tranquility, life at its best no sad unrest, a happy mind set free. xo, Don
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Date: 6/30/2011 6:35:00 PM
my most favorite place of all Shangrila as depicted in Lost Horizon ..a movie from 1939 of this glorious place where life stand still.. excellent words expressing that theme Nette luv and good luck in the contest with a precious piece of poetry.. am getting ready to post my entry for Constance's new contest written during dinner..oh..
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Date: 6/30/2011 3:09:00 PM
Dreamy expressions awakening the Shangri-la, nette
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Date: 6/30/2011 1:32:00 PM
Dear Ms Onclaud............. dreamlike, nice....reminds me of Coleridge's Xanadu......Ok netski.....I will allow you to win this one ( glad you managed to use all my best lines )...... ( ..... O M G .... O N L Y ...... J -O - K- I - N - G, ..... P E O P L E ..... H E L L O - OH - O H - )............ Yours truly............ S T Coleridge
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Date: 6/30/2011 1:10:00 PM
Excellent work of creativity, and I'm not appalled anymore, sweet nette..know you always do wonders!! Good luck for this awesome write..love, gautami
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Date: 6/30/2011 12:55:00 PM
So exact for the entry dear poet ! "A sea of words"! Awesome Nette ! Have a great weekend love ! Much love, james
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Date: 6/30/2011 12:54:00 PM
So exact for the entry dear poet ! "A sea of words"! Awesome Nette ! Have a great weekend love ! Much love, james
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Date: 6/30/2011 11:51:00 AM
Beautiful dreamy write, Nette
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Date: 6/30/2011 11:30:00 AM
beautiful and very creative write. thank you for commenting on Lilac's at home.
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