Happiness

Don't give up when the mist makes your eyes blind. Don't give up when your lover says good bye to you. Don't give up when you did something bad and you regret. Don't give up when you are torn up and you can't find your pieces. Never give up in spite of been nobody in life. Be, and only be for yourself, then after yourself you will find the others to be with. Remember that happiness doesn't live next to you, but inside of you.

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Date: 6/3/2024 2:58:00 PM
Hello Maria, Good advice for everyone. I loke this so much, it will be my fav. Congratulations on your POTD. Hugs. /DRLENE/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/4/2024 10:08:00 AM
Hello Maria, It is like aq summer day here in Canada. I like this poem so much. Your welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 6/3/2024 11:58:00 PM
Good morning my dear Darlene. Thank you so much for your uplifting words and the Fav. Hugs/ María
Date: 5/29/2024 1:14:00 PM
Such a beautiful message, Maria!! Thank you for sharing it with us. It's very inspiring and very true!
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/30/2024 12:59:00 AM
Thank you very much Sumita, for reading and leaving your kind comment. Blessings!
Date: 5/28/2024 4:24:00 PM
What a powerful, motivational message here. Particular love the closing line: “…happiness doesn’t live next to you, but in you.” So often we forget that we are responsible for our emotions and lives. Happiness is a choice, not something that happens to you. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD, well deserved. May you always choose happiness every morning.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/28/2024 11:29:00 PM
Good morning Edward. Thank you very much for stopping by, for your lovely words and wishes. I appreciate it. I hope you also wake up full of happiness. Have a great day. Blessings!
Date: 5/24/2024 9:02:00 AM
When it is all said and done, yes, happiness must be found inside. There is a grieving period, but don’t stay there. Congrats on POTD!
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/24/2024 10:00:00 AM
Thank you so much for your nice comment Kim. Blessings!
Date: 5/24/2024 2:15:00 AM
- A positive and uplifting poem, Maria :) - (I read this yesterday, but forgot to congratulate, sorry, my friend ) - A wonderful poem, congratulations on p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/24/2024 2:54:00 AM
Good morning Anne-Lise. Thank you very much my dear friend for your wishes and uplifting comment. Have a wonderful weekend! Hugsxxxx
Date: 5/23/2024 10:20:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD.. I enjoy these words of courage.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/24/2024 1:44:00 AM
Thanks a lot for your kind words Hilda. Blessings!
Date: 5/23/2024 8:09:00 PM
' happiness doesn't live next to you, but inside of you. ' So true, Maria. Always be true to who you are. I completely agree, my dear friend. Your thoughts curl gently around me. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/24/2024 1:46:00 AM
Thank you very much for your uplifting comment, which I really appreciate, Brandy. I hope you have a great day!
Date: 5/23/2024 6:27:00 PM
Good poetic admonition Maria
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/24/2024 1:47:00 AM
Good morning Tom. Thanks a lot for your lovely comment. Blessings!
Date: 5/23/2024 6:10:00 PM
Maria, this may well make it to my fridge door! True x as once we realise the search for contentment is internal life takes on a whole new dimension.. worthy poetic wisdom for Poem of the Day. Blessings, Sam :) x
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/24/2024 1:49:00 AM
Thank you very much dear Sam for your uplifting and lovely words. I appreciate them. Have a wonderful day!
Date: 5/23/2024 5:33:00 PM
"Pearls of Wisdom," Maria. And one of good cheer, too! An enriching message you penned. Congratulations to the POTD, Maria! I hope you have a good evening! Warm Regards, William
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/24/2024 1:51:00 AM
Good morning dear William. Many thanks for your beautiful comment and wishes. Hoping you have a wonderful day!
Date: 5/23/2024 3:18:00 PM
"Remember that happiness doesn't live next to you, but inside of you", priceless wisdom, Maria. Congratulations on your fine POTD, my friend! Enjoy your special day of recognition. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/23/2024 3:28:00 PM
My dear friend of Texas, I really appreciate your message. You don' t know how happy I am, not because of your Congratulations, but because of hearing from you! Love you both. I hope and blow the best wishes to you and Saraxxxx
Date: 5/23/2024 12:10:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Maria …..simple and clear!! Congratulations on POTD…..Debx
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/23/2024 1:00:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comment Debx. I appreciate it. Hugsxxx
Date: 5/23/2024 12:10:00 PM
Congrats on being POTD. Nice poem.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/23/2024 1:01:00 PM
Thanks a lot Benjamin. I aprecciate your wishes and nice comment. Blessings!
Date: 5/23/2024 11:48:00 AM
Uplifting, inspiring pearls of wisdom. Congratulations on your POTD :-)
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/23/2024 11:53:00 AM
W J Clarke you uplifted my evening with such a kind comment. Many thanks to you my friend! Blessings.
Date: 5/23/2024 10:26:00 AM
A very uplifting piece, Maria. Congrats on POTD, as well.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/23/2024 11:00:00 AM
Hello there Jim, thank you so much for your kind message and wishes. Blessings!
Date: 5/23/2024 10:05:00 AM
Very kind and warm supportive community it is, and what comes around goes around, what you share in your positive poems, spreads like wild fire, sweet Maria. Happiness begins within! Congratulations on your POTD with a poignant message! Enjoy your day xhugsx Anaya
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/23/2024 10:59:00 AM
Dear Anaya. Your comment, which I really appreciate, is very uplifting to me. Thanks a lot for your kind words. Blessings my friend. Hugs!
Date: 5/23/2024 9:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your powerful "Happiness" write. So True... Fav for me... Have a blessed day writing away.......
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/23/2024 10:57:00 AM
My dear friend Paula. Many thanks for your lovely message and also for the Fav. I appreciate it. Have a wonderful afternoon. Blessings!
Date: 5/23/2024 8:50:00 AM
Great advice Maria, for overcoming the things we go through. I liked, "remember that happiness doesn't live next to you, but inside you".
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/23/2024 10:50:00 AM
Many thanks David. I appreciate your kind message. Hugs!
Date: 5/23/2024 7:59:00 AM
What a powerful reminder for all, happiness lives within you, never give up despite the challenges one may face! Well delivered! Congratulations on receiving potd. This is soul warming and very uplifting! sending you light always
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/23/2024 10:49:00 AM
Your comment is so uplifting my friend. Thank you very very much. Hope you have a great afternoon my friend!
Date: 5/23/2024 7:37:00 AM
A very poignant write Maria. I especially like "...Don't give up when you are torn up and you can't find your pieces." Very nice. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/23/2024 10:47:00 AM
Thank so mych my dear Linda. I appreciate it. Hugsxxx
Date: 5/23/2024 6:31:00 AM
Many congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Very inspiring.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/23/2024 10:45:00 AM
Thank you my dear Victor. Have a great evening!
Date: 5/23/2024 6:03:00 AM
Very inspiring verse Maria, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/23/2024 10:03:00 AM
Thank you very much Tom. I appreciate it.
Date: 5/23/2024 5:47:00 AM
True words, Congrats on POTD
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/23/2024 5:49:00 AM
Thank you so much Joseph. Blessings!
Date: 5/23/2024 4:57:00 AM
Dear Maria, Just read your poem and saw it got POTD! YEAH!!! Your words are so powerful and inspiring. They really hit home. Such a beautiful piece with the world. Never stop writing—your voice matters. Big hugs, and Blessings, Daniel
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/23/2024 5:45:00 AM
Thank you very much dear Daniel for your words of encouragement. I really appreciate them. Blessings! Hugs!
Date: 5/23/2024 2:52:00 AM
Great advice and an inspiring potd! Congratulations
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/23/2024 4:01:00 AM
Thank so much dear Karen for your nice comment. Blessings!
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