Halloween

Sometimes I wonder if I have made a career out of Halloween -- dress-up you know: the right garment for the day -- the right creature of face, and tone of play -- prerecording somewhat before each outgoing venture -- (brush and polish) ( a little thought as to what to create...or perhaps righteously abolish?) I have been both angel and devil -- tricked and treated, been tricked and treated -- never seriously won nor been entirely defeated -- something to say of value in all that I guess I no longer ring bells but am yet enchanted by the chimes of youthful others so, I will answer the door if rung...candy in hand scary enough at my age:)

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Joe Maverick

Date: 10/31/2024 11:26:00 AM

Its a wonder the authoritys have not sent a Militant tooth-fairy onto you Joe-Dimino.? I trust you are not too scary anyway.' Mind You though you do use the truth s lot.? Hmm And that might scare many???

Joe Dimino
Date: 11/1/2024 11:06:00 AM

Truth is scary for many...lies can always be changed to suit the occasion. Thank you, Joe.

Valsa George

Date: 10/29/2024 10:15:00 PM

The last part I have done. In October 2018 when I visited my sister in Florida, on Halloween night, I was entrusted to open the door when knocked and distribute some sweets to all who came in eerie Halloween dresses. For me it was a novel experience and I obliged my sister with pleasure and curiosity as we do not have a Halloween celebration here. Dear Joe, I enjoyed your poem.

Joe Dimino
Date: 11/1/2024 11:08:00 AM

I have strong convictions, but Halloween can be a great teaching tool, a chance to explain to children what is inside of us that makes us afraid.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/27/2024 7:10:00 PM

Dear Joe; while i sense a hint of humor, i think it is true what you’ve stated in your poem in such a creative manner , especially the opening lines and also i couldnt help but agree with these words “ I have been both angel and devil -- tricked and treated, been tricked and treated -- ” such honesty that many can resonate with. The depth in this poem is impressive! Pleasure reading. Sending you light always

Joe Dimino
Date: 10/27/2024 7:14:00 PM

Hi IE; It's been quite a journey. Thank you my friend. Blessings.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/27/2024 9:24:00 AM

You describe Halloween very well. Shows two sides of the festivities.

Joe Dimino
Date: 10/27/2024 7:12:00 PM

Thank you, Victor; just a fun write. What the heck. I often joke with my wife, that we don't need costumes anymore to be scary. Sometimes I look in the mirror and wonder, who is that creature?

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/26/2024 8:01:00 PM

Lol. You came full circle. I like the poem. Better have candy ready.

Joe Dimino
Date: 10/27/2024 6:56:00 AM

I think you hit-the-nail-on-the-head. After reading your comment, I thought to analyze this work, what was my motivation? "Come full circle"...hum...most of us look outside of ourselves, to systems, to religion for a better world, when the answer is as near as ourselves. Halloween, Christmas, whatever...it is all inside of us -- there is no question nor answer, that does not begin and end with self. We are our environment. If desiring a permanent positive change, it cannot come about by saving our climate nor manipulating our politics. No Second Coming, before the first~ ourselves!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/26/2024 11:20:00 AM

Last line funny. A good write on Halloween. I chose not to celebrate as an adult. Still fun. Bless you, dear one!

Joe Dimino
Date: 10/26/2024 12:43:00 PM

HI Kim; thank you so much. Fun to write. Blessings!