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Haiku Prince Tags Carolyn Devonshire

This a test I see? My skills on the line this time, The “King” has chosen. New kid on the block, Now called the prince of Haiku, I accept and kneel. The day almost done, As light surrenders to night, The pressure rises. Palms soaked pure sweat drips, The quill trembles in my grasp. Must not disappoint. What style to complete, Must dazzle King of Haiku. Choka a challenge. Must follow his steps. For you my King a tough choice You’re prince will perform. My note now complete, The task to choose the victim. Search for souls to tag, My eyes burrow deep, Carolyn Devonshire. Tag your it my dear! By: Nathan Bane Leccese © All Rights Reserved 05/20/09 ______________________________________________________________ *I couldn't resist Carolyn. Your such a good friend in so short of time. :-)

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Date: 6/9/2009 12:24:00 AM
Carolyn is awesome! Good form here! - eduardo
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Date: 5/22/2009 1:16:00 PM
Good job for choice carolyn, Nate good poem. Love Beth
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Date: 5/22/2009 8:36:00 AM
Kool Choka, and koolio tag for Carolyn, James
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Date: 5/21/2009 10:17:00 PM
Dear Nathan, Carolyn is the Perfect Person to Tag nice POEM to keep the Family Game of TAG going YOUR Heart speaks volumes ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 5/21/2009 8:13:00 AM
Excellent tag Nathan! Wonderful choice! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/20/2009 11:20:00 PM
caroline is one of my best friends,its so sweet of you to retag her,thanks for your kind comments and i look forward to read your writes-bravo
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Date: 5/20/2009 7:38:00 PM
You did great Nathan..and you picked the very best to tag..Yeah for our new poet. Bg
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Date: 5/20/2009 7:21:00 PM
Great choice in passing the proverbial torch, nice job...Raul
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