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the red rose of yesterday in a blue vase fades . . . withered petals fall ___________________ February 8, 2021 Poetry/Modified Haiku Copyright Protected, ID 02-1327-015-08 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, All Yours (Feb 9) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 02/09/2012 First Place

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Date: 2/9/2021 11:15:00 PM
WOW ! Congrats. Love.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/10/2021 7:54:00 AM
Anisha, thanks so much for the congrats and love _Constance
Date: 2/9/2021 7:09:00 AM
Love this... Gorgeous Haiku... God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 2/9/2021 10:24:00 AM
Gina, thanks so much for the compliment _Constance
Date: 2/8/2021 7:51:00 PM
I see them: vase, rose, petals ... yesterday's hope never dies totally. amen and shalom, shalOm Wonderful Mo
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Constance La France
Date: 2/9/2021 10:25:00 AM
Anil, thank you for the lovely comment _Constance
Date: 2/8/2021 9:00:00 AM
Pretty haiku.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/8/2021 2:37:00 PM
Robert, thanks for the visit and the pretty _Constance

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