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Time's flowing tributary; the future changes the past. Our burial cortege concludes its course at the graveyard. Falling leaves collapse, crafting new fates; feel the weight of dust. Some are wagered in a pitcher with burnt bones and ash charred We tread the twisting trails, yet in the end, all come this way. The funeral site was bleak and hushed with death and decay. Where death reigns and no one recalls who under earth lay. I find peace in the abyss, grasp sky, and haze through the grave. The woods are gray guiding the cars and assuaging the crave Nothing appears in the night when it is too brief to save. With outworn obelisk, only the moss knows the rent draft You have rote recall for this wreath, yet no time in this yard. Trusting that I would rest here, bereft of any rich ray. Leaving behind all my hard-gained assets by a name waive. 1st Place contest winner Written: February 22, 2023 Writing Challenge - G Words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France This poem form is the Fragmented Rhyme invented and Conceived by Constance La France. It has 14 lines with indentation, and a rhyme scheme, as follows: ABABCCCDDDABCD

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Date: 3/1/2023 11:44:00 PM
Sotto, excellent writing on a dark theme and thank you for using my created form, I am honored. And congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - G Words, well done, Wish I could see the image I imagine it is lovely, blessings, Constance
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Date: 2/25/2023 10:58:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 2/24/2023 7:31:00 PM
"Falling leaves collapse, crafting new fates; feel the weight of dust" - beautiful image. Great work. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/24/2023 3:44:00 PM
I love the morbidity of this soulful write Lasaad. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 2/24/2023 3:23:00 PM
So many beautiful words, Lasaad. And you made that hard form look easy! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/24/2023 1:36:00 PM
A wonderful elegy Sotto, beautiful words. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Date: 2/24/2023 1:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!!  What a write. Your pen was working overtime. Love it and the picture. Have a great/blessed day writing away............................
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Date: 2/23/2023 5:51:00 AM
Aptly described images bring forth the silence and grief of graveyard. Best to you my friend.
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Date: 2/23/2023 4:00:00 AM
- Rich and beautiful use of words ... best wishes in the contest, Las - Without a doubt, a top winning poem :) - hugs
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Date: 2/22/2023 10:59:00 PM
Dispite their gloominess I always find them peaceful places, you rose well to the challenge Lasaad, best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 2/22/2023 10:57:00 PM
A stupendous poem, very descriptive. It's the way we must all go. Best for a win.
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Date: 2/22/2023 7:52:00 PM
Simply amazing ! The content and the form- equally awe inspiring. Poems come at your finger tips. The words and images used are striking ! All the best in the contest, dear friend.
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