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Goodbye To Love

She was in deep ennui as her lover had left, a cacophony of discord left her completely bereft- Bona fide and authentic game he was playing, caught up in the baroque words he was saying. An anomaly relationship without love to hold, he was a dilettante at best, leaving her in the cold- Déjà vu drifted in her mind as she felt unblessed, poor elan in her pitiful life, she has confessed. An avant-garde idea she had to ease her troubled mind, maybe love’s carte blanche was the answer she longed to find. Ten Words Ten Lines 2 - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silent One January 14th, 2018

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Date: 5/5/2018 6:44:00 PM
Back with belated congrats, Laura.
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Date: 2/2/2018 9:16:00 AM
Congratulations, Laura, well written with the words given:)
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Date: 1/30/2018 1:29:00 AM
This is lovely, Laura, well woven with the words supplied. Congrats! Viv x
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/1/2018 7:08:00 AM
many thanks Viv! ;)-luloo
Date: 1/29/2018 10:27:00 PM
Congratualations on your placement! Wonderful use of words in avsad but marvellous poem!
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Date: 2/1/2018 7:07:00 AM
thank you Mansi :)-luloo
Date: 1/29/2018 9:44:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your win :) hugs
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/1/2018 7:07:00 AM
thank you dear Eve :)-luloo
Date: 1/29/2018 7:51:00 PM
A sadly beautiful write Laura of melancholy love. Excellent use of the required words. Congratulations on your wonderful win! ~Susan
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/1/2018 7:07:00 AM
many thanks sweet lady :)-luloo
Date: 1/29/2018 1:39:00 PM
A sad love story like so many.. Great poem using the ten words Lulloo.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/1/2018 7:07:00 AM
thank you sweet man! Be blessed ;)-lulooo
Date: 1/15/2018 12:42:00 AM
GL with this well penned poem, Laura.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/15/2018 1:05:00 AM
thank you lovely Line :)-luloo
Date: 1/14/2018 4:02:00 PM
Laura, very nice for the contest, soup mail
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/15/2018 1:04:00 AM
many thanks lovely lady ;)-luloo
Date: 1/14/2018 12:55:00 PM
so poignantly quilled with beautiful flow of lines, loo... you are unstoppable!..huggs
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/15/2018 1:03:00 AM
thank you sweet Nette :)-luloo
Date: 1/14/2018 11:42:00 AM
Don't think we ever find love's carte blanche. Oh, well, you write about it so tenderly.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/15/2018 1:03:00 AM
thank you sweet Sunlite :)-luloo
Date: 1/14/2018 11:38:00 AM
Laura, Love comes in many shades.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/15/2018 1:03:00 AM
sure does thank you :)-luloo

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