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Goodbye

Our time together over now We could not grow in shade Pale and fragile we emerged Trying the commitment made So our paths go different ways But I leave you a kiss or two Blown on the breezes of regret I bid you dear a fond adieu Barbara Gorelick Poet II contest 9/5/14 " Leave You A Kiss"

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Constance La France

Date: 9/6/2014 5:31:00 PM

Barbara, your poem is full of deep beautiful emotion, best of luck in the contest ~~

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/5/2014 8:17:00 PM

Oh this is beautifully sad. -we could not grow in shade- wow what a line! best of luck in the contest sweetie, this was very good :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/5/2014 5:25:00 PM

A parting of the ways with a kiss. Great write Barbara:-) good luck with the contest. Hugs Jan xx