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Good-Bye, Old Friend

On this most unusual autumn day I must say goodbye to an old friend, a gigantic, ancient oak tree in my front yard: You have shaded my porch for the three decades I’ve resided here, enabling me to sit in my swing on hot days admiring my surroundings and composing poems. You have been the home of innumerable squirrels. Delightful little songbirds have perched on your branches and serenaded me with their delightful, happy trilling. Limb by limb, you have been dying for a long time. Twice, you have had to part with appendages, felled by saws—at my reluctant bidding, but of necessity. Twice, your limbs have fallen on their own, in my yard and even on the road! Horrendous weather is coming, with ice and high winds. For self and neighbors, I fear your huge dead limbs on your right side, which have borne no leaves for several years. How they creak when the wind rises! The tree cutters will be here tomorrow. Not even a stump will remain at day's end. From this time forward, I will behold the void where you once lived. I won't forget you. Your siblings are still here, tall and strong--as you once were. God willing, they will outlive me! Good-bye! December 26, 2022 Contest: Still Life, Autumn Scene Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Date: 1/9/2023 9:44:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to an old oak tree. I can so well relate. The same thing happened to us too. We had to cut down a huge mango tree, its branches encroaching into our neighbor's property which was initially lying deserted. Later when they started the construction of a building there, we had to cut the entire tree. Besides the cool shade it gave, it used to give us such beautiful mangoes through out the year. I still miss it. A lovely poem dear Janice.
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Date: 12/31/2022 7:45:00 AM
I am sorry for the loss of your friend Janice. I've experienced that in my yard as well. It's comforting to know the siblings are there. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/2/2023 8:32:00 AM
Thanks SO much, Linda. Janice
Date: 12/28/2022 6:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Janice. Many blessings to you
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/29/2022 3:23:00 PM
Thanks so much, Eve, for sponsoring and for my win. Janice
Date: 12/26/2022 11:50:00 AM
a wonderful tribute to your old friend, janice! touchingly written...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/26/2022 5:54:00 PM
Thanks so much, Ilene. Janice
Date: 12/26/2022 9:30:00 AM
It will certainly leave a void in your view Janice a great shame it has to go. Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/26/2022 5:54:00 PM
Yes. I grieved over it! Thanks so much, Tom. Janice
Date: 12/26/2022 9:26:00 AM
That's a fine tribute to one who has served you well, Janice. I hate the thought of having to fell any tree, but necessity merits it to be done. Your kind words show the depth of your sorrow.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/26/2022 5:55:00 PM
Thanks SO MUCH, Lin! Janice

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