Golden

a thunk to the ground it fell a muse of beauty polished upon my pant leg golden delicious...... a juicy delight sweet and firm love..... ___________ CONTEST

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Brandee Augustus

Date: 11/26/2010 6:45:00 PM

You just described my favorite apple. It the only apple that I'm capable of eating the skin. Very nice and congratulations!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/25/2010 9:22:00 AM

Congratulations Rick on your win in Barbara's contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2010 9:21:00 PM

Great way to describe an apple, Rick. Very descriptive . congratulations.

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/23/2010 9:46:00 AM

great entry Rick congrats on your HM placement in the contest

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 10/23/2010 8:22:00 AM

Fresh is the only way to go, Rick. Especially golden delicious. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/23/2010 7:50:00 AM

Best way to eat them. Great win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/23/2010 5:26:00 AM

Congrats Rick on your HM in BG's contest with this yummy delightful piece ... enjoyed with luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/23/2010 4:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/22/2010 11:21:00 PM

Congrats on your win in my contest. I loved" a muse of beauty"..soup mail..BG

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/7/2010 10:42:00 AM

It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Rick. May your days always be filled with good health, love beyond expectation, and an overload of inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/7/2010 9:19:00 AM

Like this piece Rick..good luck in the contest.. fell from the tree to the ground.. love.. great idea.. for a great poem.. my friend..with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/7/2010 5:30:00 AM

Thanks. this can be my dish as I am totally vegetarian, the juicy and sweet, Rick Good luck in the contest

Thvia Shetley

Date: 10/7/2010 5:09:00 AM

truly enjoyed your poem my friend, best of luck to you in the contest! My entry took a whole different approach, ha ha! Stop by and say hello some time!

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/6/2010 10:14:00 PM

love it, good luck in the contest