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God Knows Where I Am-'Lost In Phantom Night'

Walking corridors of derailed delusions I welcome my created confined confusions For I am lost in phantom night... I dance with demons deploying death Desirous destruction of my life’s last breath Consciously cocooned manic moonlight... A bipolar bliss within tangled time Waiting for a savior of an angels chime For I am lost in phantom night... Secluded silences in a whirlpool of winter My starving soul soaked in a lachrymal linger Tormented tears taking fatalistic flight... Only God knows where I am Devoured by lions this gentle lamb Farewell to this nefarious night... June.07.2017 God Knows Where I Am - Contest Sponsored by: craig cornish

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Craig Cornish

Date: 6/13/2017 10:38:00 AM

WW-Your take on this was cleverly poetic, your use of assonance and alliteration helped pull the feeling together.

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/13/2017 4:59:00 PM

Thank you so kindly Craig...god bless...^WW^

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/11/2017 8:28:00 PM

Indeed "lost" is the best description of this tragic true event. It breaks the heart to know it truly happened because of an illness that couldn't be silenced. What a gifted pen you have. Well done !

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/12/2017 10:31:00 AM

Thank you so much, Carrie, for the kind comment...god bless...^WW^

Joseph May

Date: 6/11/2017 1:57:00 PM

Congrats on your win Winged Warrior

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/12/2017 10:30:00 AM

Thank you again, Joseph...god bless my friend...^WW^

Kenny Gwena

Date: 6/9/2017 10:01:00 PM

Congratulations. Awesome work.

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/9/2017 10:33:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kenny...god bless...^WW^

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/9/2017 4:41:00 PM

Congratulations! Well done :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/9/2017 10:30:00 PM

Thank you Heidi...god bless...^WW^

Akkina Downing

Date: 6/9/2017 2:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your awesome potd, WW...hugs :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/9/2017 10:28:00 PM

Thank you Akkina...hope all is well my friend...god bless...^WW^

Eye Truth-Teller

Date: 6/9/2017 12:04:00 PM

Congrats on POTD

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/9/2017 10:27:00 PM

Thank you friend...all the best and god bless...^WW^

Lenna Walker

Date: 6/9/2017 11:22:00 AM

Congrats on POTD, well deserved !

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/9/2017 10:25:00 PM

Thank you Lenna...god bless...^WW^

Sara Ella

Date: 6/9/2017 10:03:00 AM

Very well done, WW! Congratulations on the POTD :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/9/2017 10:25:00 PM

Thank you Sara...god bless...^WW^

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 6/9/2017 9:58:00 AM

I'm going to save this one for it gives me understanding of the bi polars in my family. Thank you for your openness and a beautifully written poem. Congratulations!

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/9/2017 10:23:00 PM

Thank you Sunlite...god bless...^WW^

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/9/2017 9:16:00 AM

So very well done WW, congratulations for POTD honors.

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/9/2017 10:22:00 PM

Thank you Chuck...it would not be complete without you my friend...all the best...^WW^

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/9/2017 7:30:00 AM

Hey Wingman, congratulations on POTD. Great poem, should do very well in contest:)

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/9/2017 10:17:00 PM

Thank you dear friend...hope your doing O.K Daniel...god bless...^WW^

Agnes Krampe

Date: 6/9/2017 6:11:00 AM

Congrats on POTD, W.W. Great use of alliterations.

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/9/2017 10:16:00 PM

Thank you Agnes...hope all is good...god bless...^WW^

Joseph May

Date: 6/9/2017 5:26:00 AM

A sad journey into the "phantom night"...Congrats on POtd

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/9/2017 10:15:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph...how are you, my friend...^WW^

Maria Williams

Date: 6/9/2017 3:41:00 AM

Congrats on POTD..... Maria

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/9/2017 9:58:00 PM

Thank you Maria...all the best...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/9/2017 2:39:00 AM

- CONGRATULATIONS P.O.T.D. :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/9/2017 9:53:00 PM

Thank you...I had no idea...all the best ...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/7/2017 1:56:00 PM

- A great description of deep feelings and pain W.W. - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/9/2017 9:52:00 PM

Thank you dear Anne-Lise...hope all is well in beautiful Norway...god bless...^WW^

Lin Lane

Date: 6/7/2017 7:09:00 AM

You're not lost, my warrior friend, just entangled in a web of fantastic alliteration. God always knows where each of us can be found. Hang on...I'm coming after you. This is written so very well.

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/9/2017 9:42:00 PM

Thank you, dear lady Lin...I'm waiting for you...with a pen, paper, and a brush lol...god bless...^WW^

White Wolf

Date: 6/7/2017 7:04:00 AM

^WW^, I have bipolar type 3 or cyclothymia (Rapid) And even I can't describe as well as your beautiful pen! I simply have to fav this write, my friend! (It is the psychotic episodes that are both frightening and fantastic in one) Very hard to explain! Thank you for this!

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/9/2017 9:33:00 PM

Thank you dear friend...I'm very sorry to hear about your condition...but I guess we all have skeletons in our closets...my ex-wife was somewhere between bipolar and schizophrenic...so I have a little experience about it but no real solution...especially around the late 70's early 80's...very little help then...sadly it cost us our marriage...it was very troubling to see a young child trapped inside an adult body...so now I understand a bit...take care Wolfie...^WW^