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God Knows Where I Am-'Lost In Phantom Night'

Walking corridors of derailed delusions
I welcome my created confined confusions
For I am lost in phantom night...

I dance with demons deploying death
Desirous destruction of my life’s last breath
Consciously cocooned manic moonlight...

A bipolar bliss within tangled time
Waiting for a savior of an angels chime
For I am lost in phantom night...

Secluded silences in a whirlpool of winter
My starving soul soaked in a lachrymal linger
Tormented tears taking fatalistic flight...

Only God knows where I am
Devoured by lions this gentle lamb
Farewell to this nefarious night...




June.07.2017
God Knows Where I Am - Contest
Sponsored by: craig cornish

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Craig Cornish Date: 6/13/2017 10:38:00 AM WW-Your take on this was cleverly poetic, your use of assonance and alliteration helped pull the feeling together. Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 6/13/2017 4:59:00 PM Thank you so kindly Craig...god bless...^WW^

Carrie Richards Date: 6/11/2017 8:28:00 PM Indeed "lost" is the best description of this tragic true event. It breaks the heart to know it truly happened because of an illness that couldn't be silenced. What a gifted pen you have. Well done ! Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 6/12/2017 10:31:00 AM Thank you so much, Carrie, for the kind comment...god bless...^WW^

Joseph May Date: 6/11/2017 1:57:00 PM Congrats on your win Winged Warrior Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 6/12/2017 10:30:00 AM Thank you again, Joseph...god bless my friend...^WW^

Kenny Gwena Date: 6/9/2017 10:01:00 PM Congratulations. Awesome work. Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 6/9/2017 10:33:00 PM Thank you so much, Kenny...god bless...^WW^

Heidi Sands Date: 6/9/2017 4:41:00 PM Congratulations! Well done :) Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 6/9/2017 10:30:00 PM Thank you Heidi...god bless...^WW^

Akkina Downing Date: 6/9/2017 2:43:00 PM Congratulations on your awesome potd, WW...hugs :) Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 6/9/2017 10:28:00 PM Thank you Akkina...hope all is well my friend...god bless...^WW^

Eye Truth-Teller Date: 6/9/2017 12:04:00 PM Congrats on POTD Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 6/9/2017 10:27:00 PM Thank you friend...all the best and god bless...^WW^

Lenna Walker Date: 6/9/2017 11:22:00 AM Congrats on POTD, well deserved ! Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 6/9/2017 10:25:00 PM Thank you Lenna...god bless...^WW^

Sara Ella Date: 6/9/2017 10:03:00 AM Very well done, WW! Congratulations on the POTD :) Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 6/9/2017 10:25:00 PM Thank you Sara...god bless...^WW^

Sunlite Wanter Date: 6/9/2017 9:58:00 AM I'm going to save this one for it gives me understanding of the bi polars in my family. Thank you for your openness and a beautifully written poem. Congratulations! Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 6/9/2017 10:23:00 PM Thank you Sunlite...god bless...^WW^

Charlie Smith Date: 6/9/2017 9:16:00 AM So very well done WW, congratulations for POTD honors. Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 6/9/2017 10:22:00 PM Thank you Chuck...it would not be complete without you my friend...all the best...^WW^

Daniel Turner Date: 6/9/2017 7:30:00 AM Hey Wingman, congratulations on POTD. Great poem, should do very well in contest:) Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 6/9/2017 10:17:00 PM Thank you dear friend...hope your doing O.K Daniel...god bless...^WW^

Agnes Krampe Date: 6/9/2017 6:11:00 AM Congrats on POTD, W.W. Great use of alliterations. Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 6/9/2017 10:16:00 PM Thank you Agnes...hope all is good...god bless...^WW^

Joseph May Date: 6/9/2017 5:26:00 AM A sad journey into the "phantom night"...Congrats on POtd Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 6/9/2017 10:15:00 PM Thank you, Joseph...how are you, my friend...^WW^

Maria Williams Date: 6/9/2017 3:41:00 AM Congrats on POTD..... Maria Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 6/9/2017 9:58:00 PM Thank you Maria...all the best...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/9/2017 2:39:00 AM - CONGRATULATIONS P.O.T.D. :) Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 6/9/2017 9:53:00 PM Thank you...I had no idea...all the best ...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/7/2017 1:56:00 PM - A great description of deep feelings and pain W.W. - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 6/9/2017 9:52:00 PM Thank you dear Anne-Lise...hope all is well in beautiful Norway...god bless...^WW^

Lin Lane Date: 6/7/2017 7:09:00 AM You're not lost, my warrior friend, just entangled in a web of fantastic alliteration. God always knows where each of us can be found. Hang on...I'm coming after you. This is written so very well. Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 6/9/2017 9:42:00 PM Thank you, dear lady Lin...I'm waiting for you...with a pen, paper, and a brush lol...god bless...^WW^

White Wolf Date: 6/7/2017 7:04:00 AM ^WW^, I have bipolar type 3 or cyclothymia (Rapid) And even I can't describe as well as your beautiful pen! I simply have to fav this write, my friend! (It is the psychotic episodes that are both frightening and fantastic in one) Very hard to explain! Thank you for this! Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 6/9/2017 9:33:00 PM Thank you dear friend...I'm very sorry to hear about your condition...but I guess we all have skeletons in our closets...my ex-wife was somewhere between bipolar and schizophrenic...so I have a little experience about it but no real solution...especially around the late 70's early 80's...very little help then...sadly it cost us our marriage...it was very troubling to see a young child trapped inside an adult body...so now I understand a bit...take care Wolfie...^WW^