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Glimpse Of Laundry Hanging On Balcony

A scrubbing time's piece From dark cloth and pillow hugs, Well manners bleached on Smudge, gone moments by light that A blotchy face remembers.

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 4/24/2025 6:27:00 PM

The poems of yours that I have read so far, have such a sensory feel. What a special fragrance laundry has when dried on a line outside. I bet each piece has some stories to tell if they could, what do you think?

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/1/2024 4:07:00 PM

Will manners bleached on... this wouldn't have come to me in a million years. So so creative. You have quite the way of expressing ordinary things extraordinarily.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/20/2024 9:31:00 AM

Oh I am sorry what I said before. There were more than just one picture! I need to go see the picture you chose . I hope yours was a winner. You had some really creative imagery.

Paige Hind
Date: 7/20/2024 11:14:00 AM

Actually it's from my own balcony, lol- where my laundry was drying. :) Not for a contest, just was feeling it.

Silent One

Date: 7/19/2024 2:01:00 PM

Great use of words for this form.. nice selection of words..

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/18/2024 11:16:00 PM

And now the ironing. Laundry day is a headache. Pleasant smelling clothes are a joy. I enjoy the balcony picture in this poem.

Ink Empress

Date: 7/18/2024 3:11:00 AM

“ Well manners bleached on Smudge, gone moments by light that” love that! Well manners so hard to find nowadays. If only we can wash not just clothes or laundry, but some behavior of some. Clever write: how you got inspired by your laundry is impressive. Pleasure reading you

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/17/2024 10:20:00 AM

Interesting wording! Hugs ~ Kim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/17/2024 6:00:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2024 4:20:00 PM

Is this for the paint a picture contest? Gosh, I don't recall these things on the porch. Maybe you have a good eye for detail!

Paige Hind
Date: 7/16/2024 4:32:00 PM

They're hanging over the rail, over the balcony- changed it fr you, so you can understand! :)