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Girl Lost

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People, Outdoors, Lost Girl In Fantasy, Manipulation

My heart and soul broken and frayed, most of my life I have been afraid ! The forest became my sanctuary the birds and trees were my friends ... nature whispered my name Oh, in nature I always find my peace, I now accept the sorrow in my life; and nature is a wonderful release, but why has this life stabbed me with her knife ! I pick wildflowers in a meadow near a stream ... for graves below trees ______________________ March 19, 2022 Poetry/Crystalline/Kimo/Quatrain/Haiku/Girl Lost Copyright Protected, ID 03-14400-918-19 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance LaFrance Written for the Premier contest, A Combination of Forms sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged 04/30/2022 Second Place

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/2/2022 3:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Constance. Your words perfectly describe your photo! Blessings!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/1/2022 7:35:00 AM

Great! Congratulations!

Constance La France
Date: 5/1/2022 10:05:00 PM

Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/30/2022 3:06:00 PM

Constance, congratulations on your podium placement with your beautifully penned poem!

Constance La France
Date: 4/30/2022 4:31:00 PM

Tania, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, blessings ~Constance

Ann Peck

Date: 4/30/2022 2:18:00 PM

Your poem is very lovely and sad. As a little girl, I sought solace among trees also. Your Haiku definitely stands tall. Congratulations on your big win!

Constance La France
Date: 4/30/2022 4:32:00 PM

Ann, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations , blessings ~Constance

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 4/30/2022 11:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest. How we seek solace in the company of ‘nature’….beautiful. :)Paulette

Constance La France
Date: 4/30/2022 11:53:00 AM

Paulette, thank you so much for the congratulations, comment and compliment, blessings ~Constance

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/30/2022 9:43:00 AM

Congratulations Constance! Your poem came in "Second Place" in my contest, your poem was both sad and unique, earning you a podium position. Due to the number of entries and the quality of the poems submitted, this was a difficult contest to judge, but your poem, as always, stood out from the rest, well done my friend, Emile.

Constance La France
Date: 4/30/2022 11:55:00 AM

Emile, thank you for the inspiration and contest and my fine placement, and for the congratulations, comment and compliment, blessings ~Constance

Bill Baker

Date: 3/19/2022 5:44:00 PM

Interesting form for contest. Well written as always. I like the close very much. You took broken and travel to a place of compassion for others. A satisfying journey. I hope the little girl is happy now. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Constance La France
Date: 3/20/2022 1:19:00 PM

Bill, thank you so much for the comment, it is 4 forms actually used to make one poem, Crystalline, Kimo, Quatrain, and Haiku and posted as Verse. Thank you for the compliment, yes this girl has found peace and happiness ~Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2022 3:16:00 PM

very nicely done for Emile, Dear Heart. I especially like that haiku at the end. Thanks, by the way, for my win in your last contest. hope you are enjoying your weekend and that spring is peeping in on you

Constance La France
Date: 3/20/2022 1:21:00 PM

Andrea, thank you so much for the visit and comment and compliment, yes, the snow is slowly melting, getting rain yesterday and today but can see green grass and the mountains of snow are not so high ~Constance