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For Shadow Hamilton's 'Get Ready' Villanelle Poetry contest.

This Villanelle has eight syllables per line.

The villanelle has 19 lines, split into 5 tercets (three-line stanzas) and 1 quatrain (a stanza of 4 lines). There are two repeating rhymes and two "refrains," or repeated lines.

The 1st and 3rd lines alternate as the last lines of stanzas 2, 3, and 4. The last stanza uses the 1st and 3rd lines as a rhymed couplet. If we use capitals for the refrains and lowercase letters for the rhymes, the form could be expressed as: A1 b A2 / a b A1 / a b A2 / a b A1 / a b A2 / a b A1 A2.
There is no set meter in a villanelle but there is a set rhyme scheme. There is no fixed number of syllables for each line in a villanelle. Some poets like to use Iambic Pentameter and some like to stick to certain syllables, normally between 8 and 11.
The villanelle is broken into three parts: the introduction, the development, and the conclusion. Most villanelles build up intensity and tone until they reach the conclusion

As dawn calls subtle sun to rise,  twilight cloaks clouds in charcoal hue. Robins arrive with their trill cries. Smoke puffs loom as the last star dies. Moon hides behind shades of slate blue, as dawn calls subtle sun to rise. Poppies open to charm tired eyes in fields with lustrous beads of dew. Robins arrive with their trill cries. Nature's heart glows to alchemize, casting breath-taking morning views, as dawn calls subtle sun to rise. Windows shine bright as folk arise. Pots boil as people make a brew. Robins arrive with their trill cries. Gold, purple pastels highlight skies. Saffron flames prepare to breakthrough, as dawn calls subtle sun to rise. Robins arrive with their trill cries.

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Date: 1/12/2024 7:51:00 AM
A wonderful villanelle, congratulations
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Date: 12/23/2023 2:04:00 PM
lovely Villanelle, Silent One. The Intro was nice for clarification of form. The rhythm was smooth and rhythmic, making the poem an easy read. The repeating hammered home the theme of the poem. Great entry and likely high finisher IMHO. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 12/22/2023 1:14:00 PM
Your "Get Ready" is a lovely write with a great ending. Good Luck.... Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 12/21/2023 8:37:00 PM
Robins and birds in general are blessers of good omen. This alchemy of sentiment is a potent elixir of stage light..Magic Princess romantic in her keep of dreams. Nature bursts out her seams. Beads onto the page in vibrance sediment, makeup painted for our wide eyed good morning rise, beams. Poetic rain dance of those pasteled skies. Romantic art bleed of mind canvas, that is fluid and never drys. Another award worthy poem, Silent One
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Date: 12/21/2023 4:14:00 PM
This is truly beautiful and captivating, this amazes me my friend, I would have to read the instructions over and over , and then you write a poem to express this so easily wow, : ). Thanks for sharing your beautiful gift with us all and encouraging poets spreading the love of God throughout
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Date: 12/21/2023 3:26:00 PM
Gold, purple pastels highlight skies. Saffron flames prepare to breakthrough, as dawn calls subtle sun to rise. My favorite lines of this gem. You are quite a unique talent and I enjoy your poems. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/20/2023 4:55:00 PM
A lovely villanelle. It seemed I was looking out the window in a kitchen. Great images...
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Date: 12/20/2023 10:24:00 AM
It's all in the details, Silent One. I appropriately placed 'God' in one of my recents writes. Yours is a beautiful attribute defining a Villanelle. Word usage accentuates the tone proffering added impact to the phrase' intensity. Exceptionally well done and BOL, my friend. Btw, I necessitated a note of interest @Yorick. Aloha, William
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Date: 12/20/2023 10:11:00 AM
Getting ready to face a new day. Definitely going on my fav list.
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Date: 12/20/2023 5:33:00 AM
A lovely villanelle, Silent! I love the alliteration. Filled with sublime imagery including saffron flames, arising of the townfolk, and nature. Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 12/20/2023 1:07:00 AM
Aww truly gorgeous and a perfectly executed Villanelle.. I loved the imagery you have painted here brother and some verses are more favorite than others! I think 1st, 3rd, 4th, and last stanzas just captured my heart or maybe all of them, I really can't choose. You can write so well for any form.. I also wish to be a brilliant writer as you my brother, hehe.. best of luck for the contest! I know you will win.. as this exceptional piece sure deserves to win. Loved reading it so much brother!!
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Date: 12/20/2023 1:38:00 AM
and oh my.... I always forget that we can actually FAV poems here too. This one is going in my favorites now.
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Ayesha Iqbal
Date: 12/20/2023 1:09:00 AM
and oh my.... I always forget that we can actually FAV poems here too. This one is going in my favorites now.
Date: 12/19/2023 11:17:00 PM
Wow... wow ! This is so beautiful, so creative and so perfect. Some villanelle poems give the impression of disparate lines being forced to go together. But here the lines merge so beautifully well giving a composite view of the beauty and freshness of the early dawn. Into my FAVE
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Date: 12/19/2023 3:23:00 PM
You paint a beautiful image of dawn, Silent,, Very nicely penned
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Date: 12/19/2023 2:51:00 PM
So beautiful! Best wishes and warmest hopes dear lovely Silent One :-)
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Date: 12/19/2023 2:50:00 PM
You consistently paint such outstanding imagery. I especially liked the beginning and ending lines. These words were captivating: Moon hides behind shades of slate blue....! wow. Best wishes with the contest, Sara
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Date: 12/19/2023 2:25:00 PM
Splendid images in this lovely poem, SO. Nature hues are excellent for the repeating lines. Well done--a winner.
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Date: 12/19/2023 12:42:00 PM
This is beautifully done and beautiful itself. The discipline added a texture to lens through reverse cam into a romantic and nurturing mind.
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Date: 12/19/2023 12:30:00 PM
for sure this is going to be a winner. I wish I'd gone with imagery for my theme like you did.
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Date: 12/19/2023 12:14:00 PM
Season's Greetings! The repeat lines go well as they alternate with the Sonnet verses. Exquisite imagery and I can smell the coffee as I look out the window! Great piece for the contest SO. ~Anaya
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Date: 12/19/2023 11:18:00 AM
SO, your amazing images and word choice transcend dawn. I love the blend of the poetic with morning routine and the robins and poppies! So colorful! "Twilight cloaks clouds in charcoal hue." I feel like I am in the kitchen making coffee or tea and watching the world arise! An exquisite tribute to morning! So enjoyed this poem even though I am a night owl! If this is for a contest, best wishes! Merry Christmas joy to you!
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Date: 12/19/2023 10:21:00 AM
Beautiful villanelle that flows with exquisite imagery. You always paint such vivid and artistic imagery using nature as your muse that keeps your quill bleeding in various forms and hues. I love so many lines in this especially “ twilight cloaks clouds in charcoal hue.“ and also “ Nature's heart glows to alchemize, casting breath-taking morning views,” and the last stanza too with beautiful colors, definitely this is a winner as the rhymes are perfect and the refrains here are captivating! Fav
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Date: 12/19/2023 9:23:00 AM
My friend SO, your writing is truly exceptional. The vivid imagery and profound exploration of emotions and colors in your villanelle have left me in a state of awe. Your poem is a masterful display of poetry craftsmanship. BOL with the contest.
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Date: 12/19/2023 9:03:00 AM
"Moon hides behind shades of slate blue," Love that imagery. "Poppies open to charm tired eyes in fields with lustrous beads of dew." Very beautiful! Lovely poem. Reading your poem made this morning special.
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Date: 12/19/2023 7:10:00 AM
Wonderful writing. I really enjoyed. Love the dawn. It's my favorite part of the day. God bless you always, love, Gina
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