Garden

garden- blossoms galore, tickling and feasting eyes, lovely vistas of home and earth, green spot. roses, dancing in wind. maidens clad in bright red, waiting for a lip-to-lip kiss. fragrance. small bees- blossom's buddies, flit around, humming tunes. carry the cargo of pollen. reward! carpet of silken grass, invites cute lady bugs, in polka dotted dress of red. delight! April. 18. 2023 ~ Placed First~ Traditional Cinquain Poetry Contest Sponsor- Sotto Poet

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/1/2023 11:19:00 AM

Truly a spring delight of roses, ladybugs - in polkadot dresses, bees and blossoms! Valsa, your garden of delight buzzes and hums with beauty and new life! Your imagery always makes me smile with its creativity! What a gift, dear friend. Congratulations on your win! Blessings of peace and grace to you as you walk through your garden!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/30/2023 4:48:00 AM

Congratulations on this winning work in Lasaad's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing. Sara

Ann Peck

Date: 4/28/2023 9:16:00 AM

Beautiful, Valsa! Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/28/2023 8:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Garden" is a wonderful write. Have a blessed day/weekend................

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 4/28/2023 4:42:00 AM

Dear Valsa, Congratulations on your great win in the Contest. It is so cute... The way you made this old cinquain.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/28/2023 1:33:00 AM

- What a beautiful poem, Valsa :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/27/2023 6:14:00 PM

Valsa, Thank you so much for sharing your amazing poem in my Poetry Contest. Congratulations on your win

Valsa George
Date: 4/27/2023 8:31:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Lasaad for the contest and for picking up my poem for a first place win

Deb M

Date: 4/20/2023 8:10:00 AM

Such a beautifully descriptive poem Valsa…just lovely! Debx

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/18/2023 10:36:00 AM

Very nice, Valsa; a moment in time lovingly captured and presented. "small bees- blossom's buddies, flit around, humming tunes. carry the cargo of pollen. reward!" Delightful imagery.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/18/2023 9:38:00 AM

Hahahah every time I think I am on to something with my poem, I read one by a sweet lady named Valsa and have to admit hers is better ! You are a remarkable poet Valsa. This is picture perfect in every way. Maybe I should save time and congratulate you now !!! Wen x

Stephan McBride

Date: 4/18/2023 7:04:00 AM

What a beautiful poem of a garden coming to life , all working together to create a beautiful creation, love this style and elegance of its form , beauty in this poem formation itself: )

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/18/2023 5:24:00 AM

Beautiful glimpses of garden delight. Your poem is a joy to read, Valsa.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/18/2023 1:01:00 AM

Lovely write. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina