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From the Restaurant To Your Van

We tipped the waitress too much, both feeling inclined to spend our saved-up good right then. And as the woman at the door said, "You make a really beautiful couple," I stepped out into the uncertain evening: the seven-block voyage from the restaurant to your van. In thirty-something degrees, your right hand hibernates deep in the pocket. The left, however dangles free. Like a white crane with open feathers, it spreads against the black of your pea coat and my fingers want to strangle that bird, but a sign flashes "Don't Walk." Your knuckles are lonely notches: the vertebrae of a fetus hanging limp. And I'd hold you for nine months if I could, in the belly of my palm but we're approaching the corner. You dig for your keys as I wonder how many minutes are left on the meter. How many coins it would take to make time stop beating on.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/26/2009 7:41:00 AM
Very NIce! Good Luck and Merry Christmas! 30 something degress .. I do not miss! Hugs always, Robin
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Date: 12/23/2009 3:08:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor Marissa and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:17:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 10:57:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 10/23/2009 10:31:00 AM
Dear Marissa, Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry this week. Lainie
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Date: 10/19/2009 10:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 10/18/2009 4:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Marissa. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/28/2009 4:47:00 AM
Hello Marissa welcome to PoetrySoup. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/28/2009 1:27:00 AM
It's real,it's beautiful,and I can see you inside.I loved it!
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Date: 9/27/2009 9:03:00 PM
Provacative and interesting.
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Date: 9/27/2009 9:03:00 PM
Experience nicely put into words. I love "how many coins it would take to make time stop beating on". How truthful is that to most people. Keep writing your stuff.
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