Black Eyed Susan Poet Free verse

From the Hollows

“this poem is not about what is written, but what is not written…”

You bring me back to 
Life gently, with small doses
Of light airy love,
Like butterfly tugs.
The gray nothing recedes to
Blooming new color.

Soon you’re my lover.
With overwhelming passion
You shatter the spell. 
I can feel myself
Recovering with each touch,
And primitive rush.
 

7/1/11

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Donna Jones April 1, 2013 at 11:12 AM Congratulations Susan on your win....Donna

Tahera Mannan March 31, 2013 at 10:39 PM Simply beautiful Susan, many congrats for this win.

Kim Merryman March 31, 2013 at 3:28 PM Fantastic write, Susan! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Ralph Taylor March 31, 2013 at 10:16 AM Congrats, Sue. Excellent write. Well done. Great job. hugs, Ralph

Poet Destroyer A March 30, 2013 at 10:51 PM Susan, congratulations with your awesome love poem.... rendering the best part of life~ always*LINDA

Zzzzz Zzzzz September 8, 2011 at 1:08 PM A modern Sleeping Beauty tale! A nice look "between the lines" here. Well done. xoxo Robert.

Amanda Moore July 18, 2011 at 6:22 PM Very romantic, I would have to say this is what most women dream of.

Judy Ball July 10, 2011 at 5:06 PM Beautifully written and so well thought out. Very nicely done. Romantic. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich July 8, 2011 at 6:41 PM I love it just as much seeing it again, Susan. Congrats on your win with this passionate poem.

Judy Ball July 8, 2011 at 6:39 PM This is very romantic. Beautifully written and if you read between the lines you can see the tender patient love of someone healing a bruised soul. Did I get it right? God Bless, JB

Jun-Jun Villanueva July 8, 2011 at 6:38 PM CONGRATULATIONS on the placement....*_*junjun

Elaine George July 7, 2011 at 1:30 PM Beautiful free verse, Susan. Many cograts on your SUPER WIN, Lainie

John Freeman July 6, 2011 at 6:56 AM I love it, Susan. Many congrats on your presentation. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown July 6, 2011 at 5:08 AM Congratulations on your win in Constance's "The Unwritten" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud July 5, 2011 at 1:20 PM … swinging cheers to you for the amazing award, susan!! :) huggs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 5, 2011 at 12:42 PM Congrats Susan on your wonderful win with this dynamic write my friend.. a super sensational piece of poetry luv..enjoy..

Jack Horne July 5, 2011 at 10:37 AM I love this one, Susan. Many congrats : )

Constance La France July 5, 2011 at 10:13 AM Congratulations Susan on your win in my contest with this splendid poem~~

Elaine George July 5, 2011 at 12:58 AM Lovely, Susan. Best wishes in the contest. Lainie

Debbie Guzzi July 4, 2011 at 3:24 PM you may want to label it free verse Sue. Thanks for your nice comment Light & Love

Jack Horne July 4, 2011 at 2:34 PM Beautiful tender write, Susan. My wife hasn't been too good - she needs an op - so I haven't been posting so much lately. Thanks for asking : )

Kash Poet July 4, 2011 at 6:21 AM An excellent write here Susan.Best wishes.Thanks for your congratulatory message at my poem 'Raging winds'

Andrea Dietrich July 4, 2011 at 12:17 AM wow,susan, here is another one I REALLY like in this contest.Great job with the picture. it's gotta make the list!

Nette Onclaud July 3, 2011 at 11:15 AM another winning material with gentle tones a-swaying, susan!! again, congrats on the wins..:) huggs, nette

Michael J. Falotico July 3, 2011 at 8:16 AM Excellent entry that is a sure winner...always Michael

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