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From The Ashes - ITQ

The rooster crows to signal dawn with all the drama it may spawn and from which lessons will be drawn Hearts may break, love may linger on Love's sweet song, it was her delight Before the day turns into night Heartbreak's song will echo her plight and discordant notes will take flight For someone who she once adored Has left her heartbeats in discord A broken song on heartstring's chord Heartache's price some just cant afford But like a phoenix in disguise From heartbreak's ashes love will rise

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/28/2024 10:44:00 AM

From Phoenix' ashes..lovely write Joseph. Congratulations! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/27/2024 10:25:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write with your great ending again. Have a blessed day...........

Charles Messina

Date: 3/26/2024 9:32:00 PM

Joseph, nice job on this form. You did it very well. Congratulations on your top win! All the best, Charlie

Constance La France

Date: 1/13/2024 2:34:00 PM

Joseph, a beautiful poem, well written, blessings, Constance

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/13/2024 2:18:00 AM

Who can afford a heartbreak?

Deb M

Date: 1/12/2024 2:33:00 PM

Hey Joseph ….such a lovely poem which flows and rhymes beautifully! Debx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/12/2024 1:37:00 PM

I enjoyed your wonderful write/great ending. Looks like we both did this one. Good Luck... Have a blessed day writing away...............

Silent One

Date: 1/12/2024 10:47:00 AM

You did this very well using the syllable requirements and rhyming scheme very well..

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/12/2024 6:59:00 AM

Joseph, with profound emotion and masterful craftsmanship, this poem resonates deeply within the reader's soul. The seamless flow captivates my senses, while an undercurrent of love's torment echoes throughout.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/12/2024 6:26:00 AM

Heartbreak's song will echo her plight and discordant notes will take flight--these lines spell the essence of your theme for me, Joseph. I hear the angst of love.

Ink Empress

Date: 1/12/2024 12:25:00 AM

A very heartfelt and deeply moving poem so well woven. I love the flow of this . Especially love “ But like a phoenix in disguise From heartbreak's ashes love will rise” what an excellent and unique line, to end this with! Pleasure reading this. Best wishes for the contest

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/11/2024 6:15:00 PM

' Hearts may break, love may linger on. ' So true. Time does heal all wounds, and when you least expect it, a broken heart finds love again. Your thoughts are tender and emotional. My best to you, Joseph. Hugs, Brandy