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From Freedom and Remembrance

College phone call from estranged father “Just remember We love you,” he says, This the first time, I remember, . . .Remembering. . ."We love you. .." That lightning strike of joy, My heart so struck I could never speak it to him. Never speaking that heart strike even as he died, Forgiven his failings of attention, Tacit understandings of regret; A hard, Depression childhood, Toiling on Tobacco Road, Stuttering man-child Steeped in cruelty and ridicule. . .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/1/2015 10:39:00 PM
wow, another very good poem from you. I really like how you do not ramble on and on like so many free verse poets tend to do. Your lines are JUST THE RIGHT NUMbER. And I really FEEL your poetry.
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Date: 5/1/2015 5:45:00 PM
Thomas, and never been allowed to be a child, how heartbreaking, your poem is vivid and raw with emotion, 7, and thanks for visiting my poetry today, I am liking Haibun
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