From Afar

from afar contemplating row after row after row of windows frighteningly similar from afar

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Bill Baker

Date: 2/12/2022 10:35:00 PM

I see. Bill

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/10/2022 6:05:00 PM

You have me at an odds here Gershon..Is it Perspective? Have a goodnight ~ Debra

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/10/2022 6:17:00 PM

Perspective it is! -- although it depends how you look at it. ~ Daddy of Doubletalk

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/10/2022 10:19:00 AM

Are the windows on the left or the right, I presume being row after row after row, they would be only on one side, not so, but do you mean paths maybe, It could be, perhaps I'm slow, only you would know, final guess the windows are an opening to your soul, or maybe they are wishes to reach a targeted goal? Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/10/2022 6:16:00 PM

The thing about a vague poem like this one -- It's open to any number of possible interpretations. Kind of like modern art, I guess. Yours certainly are all valid. Thanks, Jennifer

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/9/2022 11:38:00 PM

Mast production, the same sameness, again thought provoking, love your poetry like this, a wake up for the mind.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/10/2022 6:15:00 PM

As one of my toughest critics once -- once -- wrote: 'What's not to like?!' lol. Thanks, Harry

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/9/2022 9:13:00 PM

Hmm...I guess as one steps back, the individual becomes a common, unimpressive massive blur. Not certain what you are saying here, Gershon...but this is what came to my mind. Thought provoking work my friend. Joe.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/10/2022 6:11:00 PM

You certainly have nailed one possibility... There are many on my version of Windows 11. lol. Thanks, Joe. :) gw