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Flights of such fantasy Fill all my senses with Foolish thoughts of being Free-spirited as a Fluttering butterfly, Floating on clouds made of Fancy marshmallow puffs.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/1/2015 4:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Lin!
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Date: 11/29/2015 10:53:00 PM
Congrats on ur superb win Lin with this lovely write!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/30/2015 4:05:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Upma.
Date: 11/29/2015 8:24:00 AM
Beautiful, Lin. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/29/2015 8:46:00 AM
And a hug back to you, Sandra. Thanks so much!
Date: 11/29/2015 6:15:00 AM
fantastical flight of fantasy for the senses - congrats on your 1st place!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/29/2015 6:21:00 AM
Thank you very much, Charlotte.
Date: 11/28/2015 6:44:00 PM
Lin, congrats on your 1st place win it was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/28/2015 6:54:00 PM
Thanks so much, Alexis.
Date: 11/28/2015 3:22:00 PM
Lin, Congrats on your fine win, SKAT LOVE
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/28/2015 6:53:00 PM
Thanks a bunch, skat.
Date: 11/28/2015 5:06:00 AM
Congratulations Lin
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/28/2015 5:21:00 AM
Hi, Nayda...thank you so much.
Date: 11/27/2015 10:56:00 PM
Nice job Lin, loved the layered effect in sentences, congrats well deserved first place. John
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/27/2015 11:01:00 PM
Thanks, John. I appreciate your comments.
Date: 11/27/2015 8:27:00 PM
Lin, I like the subject you chose and the beautiful flow to your poem, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/27/2015 11:01:00 PM
Thank you lots, Eve.
Date: 11/27/2015 6:06:00 PM
I loved this playful pleiades Lin. Congratulations on your top placement!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/27/2015 11:00:00 PM
I appreciate you reading me, Connie.
Date: 11/27/2015 4:45:00 PM
delightful poem Lin congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/27/2015 10:59:00 PM
Thanks a bunch, Jan.
Date: 11/27/2015 3:16:00 PM
Lin, I love this whimsical write! Congrats on your 1st place win and on learning a new poetry form! Love, Kim
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/27/2015 10:58:00 PM
Thank you VERY much, Kim.
Date: 11/22/2015 10:55:00 AM
This one made me smile. I love butterflies!!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/22/2015 12:27:00 PM
Goodness! Take a few of them home with you. Nice to see you're hangin' with me today. ;)

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