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Friends - Bridge Over Troubled Waters

If, in turning left instead of right You find your path uneven, and Need to stop and change your plan A comfort you can count on , a Friend to help in any way he can "I'm here for you" a steadfast rudder Sailing on both calm or stormy days Right now and in the days to come Behind you each step along the way A constant as the years turn round, to Bridge the span 'tween smiles and tears Over our life's hurdles big or small Troubled not by time or distance Water cleansing when hurts befall I sit thoughtful of promises given Will we keep our special bond intact Ease the doubt that darkness brings Your friends are there in good and bad Mind them more than the gold of kings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/10/2014 10:03:00 AM
Very well written Barbara! Congrats on top win !
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Date: 3/10/2014 9:56:00 AM
Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 3/10/2014 5:47:00 AM
hi Barbara congrats on win hugs
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Date: 3/10/2014 5:25:00 AM
Flowing verse with lovely acrostic. Congrats on the win. Barbara
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Date: 3/10/2014 12:28:00 AM
Barbara, Congratulations on your win. You maintained the theme of the lyrics throughout your whole poem. A good read. CTB
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Date: 3/9/2014 7:41:00 PM
Congrats on your win Barbara. You did this wonderfully. The theme flowed as well as the rhyme and meter. Peace. :)
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/9/2014 8:07:00 PM
Thank you Robert..appreciate your words. BG
Date: 3/9/2014 6:55:00 PM
Excellent, heartfelt over to friends, Barbara, very lovely poem, congratulations on your win!
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/9/2014 7:10:00 PM
thank you Sheri, nice to have some success at last. Bg
Date: 3/9/2014 6:28:00 PM
Nicely done Barbara. Strange how we all had a different way of using the same words. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/9/2014 6:16:00 PM
It was fun to see your poem, as if we were sharing the same idea, but in completely different ways.... and how nice to share placement with you too! In my poem, I had an oar....in your poem you had a rudder..... we should have sailed together ...lol !!!
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Date: 3/9/2014 5:34:00 PM
Very good, Barb. I read the poem several times and only now realized that a line is missing, after judging. I think I sent you a SoupMail about it, but then didn't check again. Mea culpa. Congratulations!
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/9/2014 6:30:00 PM
I don't know how many times I tried to fix that, but it always came up missing. I finally gave up..some glitch I guess..thanks...Barbara
Date: 2/11/2014 8:08:00 PM
Paul Simon and Art Garfunkel will be impressed with this piece if they ever see it. Very good write.
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 2/11/2014 8:46:00 PM
Thank you Robert, Hope it made sense,.lol

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