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Friend Or Foe

pretty fox.... smile is so charming.... the hens are impressed for Chris's yet another senryu contest

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Daniel Cwiak

Date: 9/23/2010 2:49:00 AM

Cute one here, Francine. Now we know how the fox gets into the hen house. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/21/2010 6:53:00 AM

i liked this first time i read it, and i still think it's a wonderful poem, one of my personal favourites in the contest. Harry

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2010 4:31:00 AM

Congratulations Francine on your win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "Not Another Senyru Contest!". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2010 11:08:00 PM

This was awesome, Francine. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea

James Fraser

Date: 9/20/2010 3:51:00 PM

What a scene this paints Francine. I am just awaiting for the feathers to fly. Many congratulations on your fine win >> James

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/20/2010 3:01:00 PM

A wonderful Senryu, congratulations on a well deserved win. Caryl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/20/2010 2:35:00 PM

This one sticks with me, Francine. Memorable Senryu! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/20/2010 1:33:00 PM

Congratulations on this win in the contest, Francine

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/20/2010 1:06:00 PM

uh-oh for those hens!!! Enjoyed this one, Francine --congrats on your win :)-- nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/20/2010 12:04:00 PM

Congrats Francine on your super win in the Senryu contest.. an awesome victory my friend.. enjoy with luv...

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 9/16/2010 1:27:00 AM

Oh boy this brings back memories of just how cunning our friendly fox can be - we used to have 3 hens and even though locked up by night for safety reasons for them, we would let them roam by day and off they went one by one over a few weeks... Your cute little poem has this predator spot on! Well done and thanks for your welcome comments, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.

Charles Henderson

Date: 9/15/2010 7:38:00 PM

Nice visual with an excellent message, Francine, Charles

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/15/2010 5:09:00 PM

best of luck with this gem....always Michael

James Fraser

Date: 9/15/2010 2:01:00 PM

Francine has been as clever as a fox with this GEM. Good luck in the contest :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/15/2010 1:40:00 PM

watch out .. great one Francine.. u are going to blow away the competition with this dandy entry..luv.. good luck.. enjoyed your spin off the theme luv..