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Fragrance Of Forgiveness

As the apologetic sun melts in hibiscus vase of pastel-peach horizons and peels off those pristine pigments of egoistic elegance, sailing upon aquamarine foam of vanilla waves ~ where dignity unveils a clemency within catharsis, I dare to surrender towards the pink-teal blends of calm dusks and smoky seas, bleeding in hurtful hues. But, what if, those luscious dandelions never wished to embrace life's lessons, laced with lush embroidery of martyred trust and carved a lethal language of revenge, instead? How can a carmine heart twirl in velvety remembrances, emerging out of a ebony whirlwind, when closure's oasis has never quenched the scentless thirsts of those satiric stars, desiring to inhale ebullient empathy? If forgiveness was a spring's daisy, I would blend its distilled fragrance in the flourishing essence of truths and nurture every mulberry seedling with nectarine nourishment of nascent purity. Maybe, my soul would accept my sincerity, if I confront these tears and cleanse the dialect of pain that still flows in tropical streams of endless estuaries upon black hyacinth beds. As long as cacophony surfs on the waves of angst, honesty will never be able to scintillate in the silver strings of tides, which yearn to weave shimmering peace with watercolor yarns. So, when I ascend from this earthling's ash, and take a plunge to fly beyond the seventh heaven, I don't seek to envision my harlequin feathers camouflaging to crystals of copper, and whispering in my compelled fall in hellish valleys, where I would be echoed as the 'Princess of Remorse'. I wish to be a primrose of compassion, not for those juxtaposed sunsets, embalmed in loveless lustre that conjure every glamour of the last sunshine, but for my own serenading tuscan rays that want to steal each precious heartbeat of healing, trailed by whimsical wisdom in its fading fervency. "For those, who may unfurl, an eclipsed dazzle of regret ~ let ephemeral euphony sing in evening-ripples of lemonade lakes, as, in embers we shall float, towards tomorrow's tangerine serenade"

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Date: 2/7/2024 9:00:00 PM
Back to your beautiful poem with congratulations on your well-deserved win Hiya!
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Date: 12/27/2023 7:37:00 PM
Such beautiful metaphors, wow. :) A pleasure to read! Very deep and powerful...you just keep them coming!
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Date: 12/27/2023 1:42:00 AM
I am so full of admiration for you Hiya as I inhale the fragrance of your forgiveness. The beauty of your language and the maturity you show are far ahead of your age. While most of the girls of your age will be dilly dallying, you think deep about the salient virtues of life. You have an exceptional God given gift and you should be thankful to Him. I am so proud that I share a site with such exceptionally gifted poets like you. Have a more blessed and creative year ahead! This poem is another FAVE for me. "I wish to be a primrose of compassion, -------------------------- in its fading fervency"..... I can't resist quoting these lines which i love so much.... for its depth and beauty.
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Date: 12/26/2023 2:52:00 AM
"A primrose of compassion" is delightful. The primrose is one of the first flowers of Spring. and many believe that it has a meaning of youth, renewal and optimism. So appropriate fir a compassionate soul. Well deserved win, Hiya x
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Date: 12/25/2023 10:18:00 AM
Gorgeous writing. are you twin sister of Ink Empress? You guys are so good in this style.
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Date: 12/25/2023 9:28:00 AM
"For those, who may unfurl, an eclipsed dazzle of regret ~ let ephemeral euphony sing in evening-ripples of lemonade lakes, as, in embers we shall float, towards tomorrow's tangerine serenade" -- Beautiful poem throughout. Letting go is the only way to be free from the hurt and the one or thing that hurt us. Not so easily done as perhaps sometimes said, but letting go is Spiritual Freedom.
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Date: 12/24/2023 5:05:00 PM
Beautiful poem. Loved reading it! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/24/2023 4:30:00 PM
Wonderful title, poem, and read! Best warmest wishes sweet lovely Hiya. Have a great season.. A favorite
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Date: 12/24/2023 4:43:00 AM
Only you dear Hiya can teach us about the fragrance of forgiveness with such delightful poetic words. May God bless your precious heart and give you many more inspirations in the New Year to come. :)
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Date: 12/23/2023 9:36:00 PM
… towards the pink-teal blends of calm dusks and smoky seas, bleeding in hurtful hues...I wish to be a primrose of compassion, not for those juxtaposed sunsets…lovely imagery infused with colors and alliteration!
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Date: 12/23/2023 5:19:00 PM
such elegant language, Hiya! How beautifully you've captured the essence of forgiveness and the host of emotions that can come with it. I loved 'juxtaposed sunsets.' I especially liked: If forgiveness was a spring's daisy, I would blend its distilled fragrance in the flourishing essence of truths" You're indeed a great artist with words. I admire your creativity and your spirit, a spirit that flows into your writing. Hugs, Sara
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Date: 12/23/2023 9:39:00 AM
The verses you have composed are beautifully crafted, filled with elegant language and vibrant imagery, evoking a sense of forgiveness, dear Hiya. This poem explores themes of absolution, redemption, and emotional restoration with great skill and depth. The poem's evocative imagery, metaphors, and lyrical language create a vivid tapestry of emotions, inviting readers to explore the introspective journey of the speaker. BOL with the contest.
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Date: 12/23/2023 7:20:00 AM
Beautifully penned, Hiya. I liked the expression ‘heartbeat of healing’. Indeed forgiveness offers is release from needless suffering. Forgive others and forgive ourself also. Check out Ho’oponopono on Google. There’s much more to forgiveness of course if we look deeper. I liked the way you approached this inquiry. God bless.
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Date: 12/23/2023 6:15:00 AM
If forgiveness was a spring's daisy, I would blend its distilled fragrance in the flourishing essence of truths ---I wish to be a primrose of compassion--for my own serenading tuscan rays--Awesome diction rejoices in fragrance of forgiveness. A FAVE, Hiya.
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Date: 12/23/2023 6:14:00 AM
"I wish to be a primrose of compassion..." What a lovely thought. I know you're not a Christian but forgiveness is a primary Bible doctrine. It is a foundation teaching for the hope I have. Anyway, you poetically and beautifully described the importance of this godly quality. No "Princess of Remorse," but a Princess of Empathy for you
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Date: 12/23/2023 5:44:00 AM
I really liked your 'primrose of compassion' line, Hiya. I envisioned sad tears from one in pain, crying over the delicate petals. Quite sentimental.
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Date: 12/23/2023 5:35:00 AM
Wow Hiya... This beautifully crafted poem is a contemplative exploration of forgiveness, redemption, and the complexities of emotional healing. The imagery, metaphors, and evocative language create a rich tapestry of emotions that invites readers to delve into the speaker's introspective journey...The opening lines set a poetic scene with the "apologetic sun" melting in a "hibiscus vase of pastel-peach horizons." The use of vivid colours and delicate imagery immediately draws the reader into a
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Date: 12/23/2023 5:37:00 AM
world where the speaker confronts their own vulnerabilities.. You delve into a contemplation on forgiveness and the potential resistance to life's lessons. The metaphor of "luscious dandelions" not wishing to embrace lessons and instead carving a "lethal language of revenge" introduces a stark contrast to the speaker's willingness to surrender and seek healing.. The final wish to be a "primrose of compassion" for one's own serenading tuscan rays brings the focus back to personal healing and self-compassion.
Date: 12/23/2023 4:38:00 AM
Where do i begin praising this beautiful take on forgiveness, i can smell the fragrance of forgiveness through your well crafted lines flowing with stunning flowers and eloquent diction. For a minute, i got lost in those magical metaphors. I especially love the opening and also the ending the way you’ve written the quote there is so gorgeous and creative. “ As long as cacophony surfs on the waves of angst, honesty will never be able to scintillate, “ so much wisdom there for an 18 year old
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Date: 12/23/2023 4:42:00 AM
Every word woven in this hits differently and strongly and is soulful but this truly stood out for me“ I wish to be a primrose of compassion, not for those juxtaposed sunsets, embalmed in loveless lustre that conjure every glamour of the last sunshine,” how you’ve played around with words and made it all flow is beyond impeccable! And i felt the sincerity of those lines. Brilliant alliterations and wordplay throughout depicting fragrance of forgiveness so poetically. Pleasure reading you always. Best wishes for the contest.

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