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vulnerable gentle zipper - ruby cord fragile protection against heart.....ache straight line connects left with right at night its wings ethereal fingers greet early sphere salutes the quiet whizz throbs in veins, arteries straight line wired tight left to right it holds in careful folds frail life with cords, released at night hauled in at dawn carefully balances knowledge earth today eternity tomorrow silver cord connects beacon beckons home *** Copyright © Darren White November 22, 2017

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Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 8/27/2018 12:38:00 AM

Earth today Eternity tomorrow.... and a very apt illustration of a heart mended, very well-crafted.

FJ Thomas

Date: 12/14/2017 10:47:00 AM

So very beautiful. The imagery is perfect.

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 11/25/2017 2:54:00 PM

YOU ARE HOME!!!!!!!!!! I am so happy to see you. Your poem is excellent.

White Wolf

Date: 11/23/2017 10:59:00 PM

Wowza, Duir!!! Your magical pen is happening again! Whatever they have you on I want some! Awesome

Darren White
Date: 11/24/2017 3:02:00 AM

Haha, silly, you want a zipper in your chest as well? HUGS.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/23/2017 8:14:00 AM

This is quite beautiful Darren.

Darren White
Date: 11/23/2017 8:41:00 AM

Thank you Richard :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/23/2017 8:06:00 AM

A lovely poem of our journey...All the best Darren

Darren White
Date: 11/23/2017 8:40:00 AM

Thanks so much Arturo

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/23/2017 7:39:00 AM

To read your poem after what you have undergone is really inspiring, Darren, I would say, it is sadness and pain that makes us 'poets':) superb poetry ... get well soon:)

Darren White
Date: 11/23/2017 8:40:00 AM

Thanks Jo, I'm doing my best ;)

Sara Ella

Date: 11/22/2017 11:57:00 PM

It is so good to see a new post from you and it is so beautiful my friend.<3<3<3 :)

Darren White
Date: 11/23/2017 5:58:00 AM

Thnks my dear friend <3

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 11/22/2017 8:54:00 PM

Hugs dear Piroet <3

Darren White
Date: 11/23/2017 5:58:00 AM

Thanks ma mo <3

Tim Smith

Date: 11/22/2017 7:47:00 PM

You have a beautiful heart to go along with this beautiful poem

Darren White
Date: 11/23/2017 5:57:00 AM

And you are a wonderful friend <3

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/22/2017 7:45:00 PM

Zippers, cords, lines, wings and ethereal fingers. We can visualize all. May all protect your heart, my friend!

Darren White
Date: 11/23/2017 5:57:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim, my friend :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/22/2017 7:28:00 PM

Darren, rarely do I see such poignant emotional poetry, that is also truly just great great poetry, this is amazing poetry my friend! a Fav!

Darren White
Date: 11/23/2017 5:44:00 AM

My friend, you understand and appreciate, and I like that so much :)

Lin Lane

Date: 11/22/2017 2:27:00 PM

Darren, your heart is stitched with golden threads of kindness, silver cords of humility, and diamond chains wrapped around it to protect its fragility and bind it with strength equal to that of your fortitude. It's wonderful to read you again.

Darren White
Date: 11/23/2017 5:43:00 AM

Lin, thank you so very much for your gentle words <3