Fragile

Fragile Heart hungers for A flicker of your face, Slowly trace the breadth of your frame To be 4/15/2023 Traditional Cinquain Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Sotto Poet

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Sam Scott

Date: 9/20/2023 7:51:00 PM

Some faces we just miss, others we wish we could recall more fully. The human face is a fascinating portal. Love this compact beauty.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/1/2023 11:04:00 AM

Eve, this is haunting in its hopefulness! Love the last two words - "to be!" What promises that invokes. Congratulations on your win dear friend. Blessings to you!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/30/2023 4:45:00 AM

Congratulations on this winning work in Lasaad's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/29/2023 11:10:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your win Eve! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/28/2023 11:48:00 AM

- Sensitively written, Eve - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/28/2023 8:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A story told in a few words. Have a blessed day/weekend................

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 4/28/2023 4:54:00 AM

So romantic Fragile heart hungers. What about an Iron heart? Congratulations on your win in the Contest....EVE.

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/27/2023 6:09:00 PM

Thank you so much for sharing your amazing poem in my Poetry Contest. Congratulations on your win

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/22/2023 8:32:00 PM

Very intriguing, this seems to imply a woman thinking of her unborn baby~

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/19/2023 9:33:00 AM

All the best Eve my friend in Lasaad's contest. I am so sorry I didn't enter your contests but time and I are always at loggerheads . A sad yet beautiful write Eve. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.