For the Birds

You've come to the square
expressing a need;
to this old plastic planter
thats now full of seed
for you my beauty
a thief on the fly
who has stolen my heart
with your fine feathered friends.
Sister, brother, father, mother
all come and stand
to stuff their little beaks
with crunchy treats.
Some look all around
but without any sounds, they stay.
Yes, oh Yes! stay with me
so I can see all the colors
you wear when you ruffle
your back to fly,
and later when you return
down, down in free fall
all aflutter to brake
and land within the square,
you toss seed over the edge ...
what a mess you've made!
How magnificent!
Heaven sent.
Fly, fly free never to be
in a cage (like me)
as you bob and weave
to peck at the seed
and then with a tilt to your head
your dark eyes seem to speak
right into mine
and there, just for a moment,
you stay with me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 11:06 AM
Your poetry is definitely not "For the Birds". Congrats Sue on this one being featured. Vince
Ahearn Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 6:20 AM
Fine work! The fourth verse word should be "that's" Congratulations for being a featured poet this week.
Roberts Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 9:45 AM
I am a bird lover so this one I found especially dear, nicely done, lovely poem to start my morning
Esquire Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 6:34 PM
Dear Sue, Congratulations on YOUR Featured POEM "For The Birds" Is that YOU on the bench by the Pond in the Park? If so I can tell YOU face to face how Wonderful This POEM is Relish in the Honor bestowed upon YOU Superb Write ALWAYS...HG
Mckenzie Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 4:01 PM
Sue~ I love birds so I truly love this piece Congratulations on your wonderful featured poem! Laura :)
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January 27, 2010 at 3:18 AM
Congratulations Sue, on having your delightful poem featured this week. Nature is such a gift. It was an enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing. Lovingly, Dane
Freeman Avatar
January 26, 2010 at 5:42 PM
Awesome, featured presentation,Sue. Congratulations, Sincerely, Love Moses
Austin Avatar
January 26, 2010 at 8:15 AM
"never to be in a cage like me"...This says a lot. I have many stray cats I feed on my front porch. In a way, I hope someone will take them in, but in another way........Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
Fisher Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 11:23 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
Strand Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 8:30 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Sue Rgds Brian
Sweetheart Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 9:11 PM
Congrats Sue on your featured poem of the week on Soup.. beautiful choice...luv.. Linda-Marie..
Culverhouse Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 2:50 PM
enjoyed reading today, congrats on the featured poem!!
Fraser Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 1:48 PM
Many congratulations in you deserved featured poem this week, Sue >> James
Brown Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 1:31 PM
Congratulations are your well deserved featured poem this week Sue. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 6:32 PM
Sue, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
Brown Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 6:23 AM
Congratulations Sue on all three of your poems making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Santiago Avatar
April 4, 2009 at 1:10 PM
Hello Sue, congrats on your three mastepieces surviving the first round...truly deserving to be in the finals, awesome! Cheers, Ernesto
Curcio Avatar
January 25, 2009 at 4:37 PM
What a lovely experience! I've had so many really meaningful, transcendent moments when birds have been involved. They seem to come as a harbinger of hope. Thank you for such a sweet poem.
Washington Avatar
December 27, 2008 at 6:11 PM
Great poem. Thanks for the kind comment on my poem.
Williams Avatar
October 14, 2008 at 10:01 PM
"For The Birds".. I have a bird table and its almost a daily ritual, sitting and watching.. ..describes this simple pleasure beautifully Sue "your dark eyes seem to speak right into mine".... even the bird say thank you. A lovely poem !
Williams Avatar
October 14, 2008 at 9:55 PM
Hello again sue and thank you once again for your comments; Verb ? Vowel ? which one sounded better ? both meant they same... in the end I decided and forgot to change the pasted copy.... doh! To be honest Sue I have no idea what form my poems would go into, are they all free verse ? again thankyou so much.
Spence Sr Avatar
October 5, 2008 at 8:13 PM
This is wonderful. I like the use of figurative language in this poem. The theme certainly flows all the way through. I really like the "How magnificent. Heaven sent" words and the adjoining lines. The message is excellent. Great job! ~Joseph
Loving Iii Avatar
October 4, 2008 at 1:45 PM
great work. JHL
White Avatar
October 4, 2008 at 8:54 AM
I also have a bird feeder and I just love to sit and watch them eat they are messy though, but it is all in the name of love, take care D-nyce
Torres Avatar
October 4, 2008 at 6:58 AM
Sue I love this poem. I can tell your a bird watcher. They are so beautiful. You know something though do they really make a mess they always come back and get every seed they dont waste not. I guess what they do with thatseed is the mess lol Nice write blessings Michael
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