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For the Birds

You've come to the square expressing a need; to this old plastic planter thats now full of seed for you my beauty a thief on the fly who has stolen my heart with your fine feathered friends. Sister, brother, father, mother all come and stand to stuff their little beaks with crunchy treats. Some look all around but without any sounds, they stay. Yes, oh Yes! stay with me so I can see all the colors you wear when you ruffle your back to fly, and later when you return down, down in free fall all aflutter to brake and land within the square, you toss seed over the edge ... what a mess you've made! How magnificent! Heaven sent. Fly, fly free never to be in a cage (like me) as you bob and weave to peck at the seed and then with a tilt to your head your dark eyes seem to speak right into mine and there, just for a moment, you stay with me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/31/2010 11:06:00 AM
Your poetry is definitely not "For the Birds". Congrats Sue on this one being featured. Vince
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Date: 1/31/2010 6:20:00 AM
Fine work! The fourth verse word should be "that's" Congratulations for being a featured poet this week.
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Date: 1/30/2010 9:45:00 AM
I am a bird lover so this one I found especially dear, nicely done, lovely poem to start my morning
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Date: 1/27/2010 6:34:00 PM
Dear Sue, Congratulations on YOUR Featured POEM "For The Birds" Is that YOU on the bench by the Pond in the Park? If so I can tell YOU face to face how Wonderful This POEM is Relish in the Honor bestowed upon YOU Superb Write ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 1/27/2010 4:01:00 PM
Sue~ I love birds so I truly love this piece Congratulations on your wonderful featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 1/27/2010 3:18:00 AM
Congratulations Sue, on having your delightful poem featured this week. Nature is such a gift. It was an enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 1/26/2010 5:42:00 PM
Awesome, featured presentation,Sue. Congratulations, Sincerely, Love Moses
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Date: 1/26/2010 8:15:00 AM
"never to be in a cage like me"...This says a lot. I have many stray cats I feed on my front porch. In a way, I hope someone will take them in, but in another way........Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
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Date: 1/25/2010 11:23:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 1/25/2010 8:30:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Sue Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/24/2010 9:11:00 PM
Congrats Sue on your featured poem of the week on Soup.. beautiful choice...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/24/2010 2:50:00 PM
enjoyed reading today, congrats on the featured poem!!
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Date: 1/24/2010 1:48:00 PM
Many congratulations in you deserved featured poem this week, Sue >> James
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Date: 1/24/2010 1:31:00 PM
Congratulations are your well deserved featured poem this week Sue. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2009 6:32:00 PM
Sue, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/28/2009 6:23:00 AM
Congratulations Sue on all three of your poems making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/4/2009 1:10:00 PM
Hello Sue, congrats on your three mastepieces surviving the first round...truly deserving to be in the finals, awesome! Cheers, Ernesto
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Date: 1/25/2009 4:37:00 PM
What a lovely experience! I've had so many really meaningful, transcendent moments when birds have been involved. They seem to come as a harbinger of hope. Thank you for such a sweet poem.
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Date: 12/27/2008 6:11:00 PM
Great poem. Thanks for the kind comment on my poem.
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Date: 10/14/2008 10:01:00 PM
"For The Birds".. I have a bird table and its almost a daily ritual, sitting and watching.. ..describes this simple pleasure beautifully Sue "your dark eyes seem to speak right into mine".... even the bird say thank you. A lovely poem !
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Date: 10/14/2008 9:55:00 PM
Hello again sue and thank you once again for your comments; Verb ? Vowel ? which one sounded better ? both meant they same... in the end I decided and forgot to change the pasted copy.... doh! To be honest Sue I have no idea what form my poems would go into, are they all free verse ? again thankyou so much.
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Date: 10/5/2008 8:13:00 PM
This is wonderful. I like the use of figurative language in this poem. The theme certainly flows all the way through. I really like the "How magnificent. Heaven sent" words and the adjoining lines. The message is excellent. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/4/2008 1:45:00 PM
great work. JHL
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Date: 10/4/2008 8:54:00 AM
I also have a bird feeder and I just love to sit and watch them eat they are messy though, but it is all in the name of love, take care D-nyce
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Date: 10/4/2008 6:58:00 AM
Sue I love this poem. I can tell your a bird watcher. They are so beautiful. You know something though do they really make a mess they always come back and get every seed they dont waste not. I guess what they do with thatseed is the mess lol Nice write blessings Michael
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