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I'm footloose and fancy free. My youngest daughter is twenty one. I've just returned from having fun. Visiting each and every one. Isn't it bliss to see them grown? Fully formed adults on their own. Confident, carefree, full of plans. Before they settle with a man. A job well done, I can relax. Think of only me in fact. The pitter patter of tiny feet. Will be the next I have to greet. I'm not a grandma yet, oh no! Now is my time to let go. Travel a little, while I can. Perhaps meet a new man. It's a nice way to be, fancy free. After a life of dedication. Now it's time for meditation. Relax, breathe, rejuvenation. 29/04/2017 For Fancy Free contest.

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Date: 6/1/2017 7:43:00 PM
I'll never get too old for the grands (until I'm bedfast) and why not a little fancy free with them, you can send them home hyped up and dirty, mud pies and all. Congrats, seriously, enjoy your free time while you can. Good piece.
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Jean Murray
Date: 6/2/2017 1:27:00 AM
Thank you for your sound reasoning.
Date: 6/1/2017 11:30:00 AM
Yes! Let those feet be fancy and free! Good for you! Grands will keep you busy so enjoy! Congrats!
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Jean Murray
Date: 6/1/2017 11:43:00 AM
Thank you Kim.
Date: 6/1/2017 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations, Jean, on your awesome win.... Victor said it all, when those grandchildren run and give you the biggest hugs that fells like all was worth it..<3
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Jean Murray
Date: 6/1/2017 10:29:00 AM
Can't wait now Eve. I keep dropping hints. I'm thrilled to bits.Thank you for stopping by.
Date: 6/1/2017 3:51:00 AM
Julia, I always start at the bottom of winning lists, as my name is quickest found down there. With this entry, it is still down there only this time the list has only three names. Thrilled to be included. Thank you for your placement.
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Jean Murray
Date: 6/3/2017 5:00:00 PM
49?? I'm going to faint......
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Julia Ward
Date: 6/1/2017 4:17:00 AM
I am excited for you, Jean. How thrilling to be third place out of 49 entries! Well done! Your last line is particularly masterful.
Date: 4/29/2017 6:16:00 PM
Don't wait, Jean - Now's the time to do it, that magical time between children and too old!.
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/29/2017 7:10:00 PM
Or children and grandchildren Sunlite? Either way, I agree.
Date: 4/29/2017 5:40:00 PM
Enjoy Jean....it's your time to shine
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/29/2017 5:55:00 PM
I like to think so. Thank you Tim.

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