Notes About The Poem

Follow the Directions

When I’m sinful, as I am by nature…
   Forget my wisdom and gossip or darken
       My heart with hues of dread or desperation
   Feelings felt by a heart who is disrespectful
One who knows they’re not following directions!

When I’m errant, as I have been know to be…
   Following my nature instead of grace or peace
       Heaven knows I feel as if I’ve fallen from grace
   And that I have no chance of entering heaven’s gates
Or knowing the warm touch of my Father’s ways!

When I’m wicked, as I know that I can be…
   Darkening the light that God’s glory always gives
       Sighing with discontent, silencing my joy and faith
   Reaching out toward the evil instead of the virtuous
There comes a shadow falling over my hopefulness

When I’m corrupt, as I would like to forget to be…
   Risking my love on worries, fear and trepidation
      Yearning for a chance to take back those things I did
   The ones that taught me a lesson, but made me feel…
Like I was someone deserving of God’s rejection!

When I’m evil, as I am by my very nature…
   I find my heart receding from the light that He gives me
      Eclipsed by apprehension, trouble and darkest agonies
   Yearning for the chance to get back to my best again
And give Him my sincere love - affection… praising eternally!

When I’m obnoxious, disgusting or unpleasant….
   I know He still listens, despite my iniquity
      He whispers…. “Child, you need my blessing”
   “Please listen… follow my directions - please”
“Love, love, love… is the answer”… His wonderous correction!

BELIEVE!
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Proxenos Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 4:11 AM
This poem is outstanding not only as a beautiful poem for which you got POTD, many congratulations my friend but also for the fact that you place yourself with all that you think you have done wrong bravely before God, (not hiding anything that He already knows in any case,) which I am sure, has earned you a well deserved place in His Home. Kudos Gina. blessings, Jennifer.
Jones Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 2:39 AM
Important messages in your brilliant poem! Congrats on potd!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 1:37 AM
I love how you have honored Mother Nature in your wonderful POTD Jan. Congratulations! A fave for me. Blessings xxoo
Nicole Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 9:04 PM
Such a beautiful message within and I completely agree. We must "follow (His) directions" Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. You are a wonderful example of someone living "Christ-like". Congratulations Regina, on Poem of the Day. Happy Thanksgiving, my dear friend. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
George Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 8:16 PM
No body is without faults and the one who realizes it and is sorry and is ready to rectify it, he/she is the most beautiful in the eyes of God . Love is the panacea He suggests.... love, love, love. Love your lovely write and congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 2:10 PM
Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!!! A "Beautiful" write. I Love The Ending. He does listen. Have a great/blessed day..............
Calasibetta Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 12:31 PM
Congratulations on your POTD.... "Love, ove, love...is the answer...His wonderous correction! Lovely! Blessings, Paulette
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 10:27 AM
Congratulations on POTD Gina! We are saved by grace, but you shine with love so brightly that your poems feel like sunshine! It is difficult to imagine you any of these things and believe that you too are human...one can forget and imagine there is an angel at your computer! God bless you sweet Regina, have a blessed Thanksgiving!
May Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 9:26 AM
A guiding voice to keep us on the right path, Congrats on POTD Regina
Roper Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 9:20 AM
Congratulations on POTD.. Regina, yes, "LOVE" is the key. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving.. Hugs Eve
Alex Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 8:42 AM
Wow! Such great writing on love. Congratulations!
Peck Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 8:42 AM
Gina, Love is the answer! Thank you for reminding us. Congratulations on POTD. love, Ann
Seeker Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 7:58 AM
Love is all! Superb write, Gina, congrats on POTD!
Lane Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 7:06 AM
Gina, these verses expose the depth of your humility. Such a humble nature makes you worthy of God's love. This is very well crafted for your text to have been chosen potd.
Wolf Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 7:01 AM
Gosh, and here I sit thinking that you are a lovely, gracious, wonderful person, Gina. If you be an obnoxious, wicked, evil sinner, what are the rest of us? Only G-d can judge the Truth, but it sure seems to me from the outside that Regina McIntosh may just be a wee bit tough on herself... Congrats on POTD, and have a spectacular Monday. Peace and Truth, Gershon
Jayasankar Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 6:07 AM
Such an inspiring graceful write dear Gina... Hearty congratulations on your well deserved POTD honor... Hugs... ~ Ani
Sands Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 6:03 AM
Congratulations for POTD :)
La France Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 5:35 AM
Gina, so beautiful and I love the image used and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ love and serenity _Constance
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November 22, 2021 at 2:18 AM
We all are what we are at any given time in our lives Regina, I’m guilty of all the above, alas none of us are perfect, and you fully express this quite openly and self deprecatingly, I honestly believe your a good person, congratulations on a brilliantly constructed potd, cheers David
Cunningham Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 12:57 AM
Great advice to follow Gina as we all have faults. Congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honour and your day. Tom
Trifiatis Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 3:24 AM
An inspiring and outstanding poem that should become everyone's guide in life, dearest Regina!
Brown Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 4:34 PM
Regina, What a beautiful poem, so much truth. Blessing ~ Debbie
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 7:11 AM
One of your very best, Gina! Fave!
Messina Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 3:44 AM
Gina, it is hard for me to believe you are any of the above. But what I do believe is that you are filled with love. Blessings and love to you...have a nice weekend. Love, Charlie
Mcintosh Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 5:55 AM
Thank you so much! I'm far from perfect - just a sinner saved by grace! You're a sweet friend. Love and prayers, Gina
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