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Flowers Fill My Dreams

this springtime desire oh this forever sighing the snow falls and falls bird songs and long forest walks and wild flowers fill my dreams _________________________________ March 22, 2015 Poetry/Tanka/flowers fill my dreams Copyright Protected, ID 03-656-051-22 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, Tanka 3, sponsor, Andrea Dietrich, Judged 04/2015 Third Place

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James Inman

Date: 7/11/2016 11:20:00 PM

I'm just the opposite today BW, dreaming of cool weather and maybe a few snow flakes. I was watching the petals being blown from a white Crepe Myrtle tree the other day and it reminded me of snow falling.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/2/2015 2:54:00 PM

Great winning dreams!!! Congrats..Sara

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/30/2015 9:16:00 PM

I can feel the longing for spring in your well written tanks. Congrats on your win, Constance! Love, Kim

Edward Ebbs

Date: 3/30/2015 9:00:00 PM

I can see this, a beautiful tanka, congrats :)

Mohan Chutani

Date: 3/28/2015 11:39:00 PM

Constance, a lovely wish for spring in your Tanka. Congrats. Mohan

Eve Roper

Date: 3/28/2015 11:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win a 7 Blessings eve

John Lawless

Date: 3/28/2015 1:42:00 PM

SAME HERE. Congrats on the win. A nice relaxing invite to the hope of spring.

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/28/2015 1:20:00 PM

Broken Wings, this is such a lovely Tanka filled with dreams springtime's desire. Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/28/2015 10:16:00 AM

This is wonderful Constance.....I can imagine those on the east coast can relate, after such a difficult winter. Dream on.......spring is here, and summer indeed, will offer relief! I love this !!!

David Mohn

Date: 3/28/2015 10:14:00 AM

wonderful contrast and terrific writing...big congrats

Jan Allison

Date: 3/28/2015 5:44:00 AM

oh so beautiful - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2015 12:29:00 AM

Constance, this just whispered such beauty to me. even though you kept to traditional syllable count, I enjoyed every syllable of this gem. Congrats in my contest.

Michael Dom

Date: 3/24/2015 12:50:00 PM

More flowers for you @}~ soupmail

Michael Dom
Date: 3/24/2015 12:53:00 PM

Reminded of Led Zepellins Kashmir.

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/22/2015 6:18:00 AM

This is a beauty ;) wishing you all the best for the contest ;) hugs Wilma