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Flawless With Flaws

Sometimes Flawless Isn’t Perfect I wouldn’t want a flawless man, if such a man could be. A paragon of virtue would have little need of me. A loving man with small defects would fit my way of life, And perhaps he could be happy with a less than perfect wife. If I find one without flaws who says he has a perfect mother, Then never mind, goodbye, I’ll just keep looking for another. Striving to be flawless would soon tire me out a bit. I’d rather that we grow together and just meld into a fit. A Tiny Flaw A child hungry for some praise who hears only of his flaws, May well grow listless and decide no need to try, because. The perfect poem as poets know, has not been written yet. Be thankful to those gone before for high threshold they’ve set. If there are flaws in this small poem, I hope you catch its spirit. Despite its imperfections, it could also have some merit. It is the same with people. One might have a ways to go. If you take the time to listen, you’ll find worth. Please tell him so. For Skats contest Flaws vs' Flawless won 11th .

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Date: 2/23/2011 5:24:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement Joyce, in the contest "Flawless vs' Flaws" sponsored by SKAT*. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2011 4:13:00 PM
Joyce, It is nice to see this one again, one of the BEST in the contest. Congratulations, dear. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/5/2011 5:03:00 AM
Many congratulations Joyce on your win in pd's contest, have a lovely weekend....:)
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:38:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) on your awesome win, sure enjoyed.. have a wonderful one,..p.d.
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness and rhyming in these two sets of couplets.
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:23:00 PM
Such a great message in your poem, Joyce!! Well done!! :)
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:39:00 AM
Hi Joyce - Another poem I've read that should have been placed in the top three. Congratulations on your BIG WIN in SKAT'S contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:17:00 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Joyce. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win inn the contest, Joyce
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Date: 2/4/2011 8:36:00 AM
Many Congrats on your well deserved win, dear Joyce - a very touching rendering - also - let me thank you for the great honor you bestowed on me in your contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 2/4/2011 7:06:00 AM
So very true Joyce.Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:51:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on your winning poem in Irma's contest with this wonderful write my friend.. enjoy with luv.. thankxx for your own elegant contest and my win there luv..
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:47:00 AM
Wonderful writing. Congratulations on your winning position in the contest. It is well deserved with this honest, heartfelt poem. Love, Deb
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:55:00 AM
JOYCE~Congratulations on your win~ thanks for the support* Skat
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Date: 1/18/2011 4:45:00 AM
Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry Joyce. It was a pleasure to read your amazing poetry today and I hope you will continue to write always. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be in 2011. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2011 5:49:00 PM
wow! Joyce I really love it.. imagine that a flawless man.. you have an amazing piece here,, good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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Date: 1/17/2011 5:12:00 PM
Joyce, if I meet a man who thinks his mother was perfect, I'll run -- fast and far. No one can live up to the standards of my father and that's probably why I can't find the right guy. None of us are perfect, but children need to be encouraged and reminded of their good points, not just told of their flaws. Self-confidence is at stake. Great entry for the contest I wish you success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/17/2011 4:01:00 PM
Very intriguing write..I enjoyed being drawn into the work..Good luck in the contest..Sara
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Date: 1/17/2011 3:08:00 PM
WOW, so far you and Linda have mastered this contest... I have some work to do....always Michael
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