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Flawless Crap-Flaws Forgiven

#1 Limerick Flawless Crap There once was a man that was perfect. His actions were never incorrect. That was his thought, for sure. He knows now that’s manure. As he looks at compost truck, he wrecked. #2 couplets Flaws Forgiven Everyone makes mistakes, this we all know for sure. There was only one perfect man, who was so pure. Imperfections are truly human traits, simple and plain. We all need to face this, so we all can truly gain. That our shortcomings define us, as we all learn, To teach us reality and justice, upon our return, Errors and faults are to be forgiven from us all. Listen within, or you know not what may befall. Written for Sponsor S K A T * Contest Name FLAWLESS vs' FLAWS

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Date: 2/23/2011 5:26:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement Cecil, in the contest "Flawless vs' Flaws" sponsored by SKAT*. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2011 4:17:00 PM
I love the message of both of these, particularly the flaws forgiven. Congrats on the winners' circle, cecil and glad I finally got to see your entry. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/5/2011 5:05:00 AM
Many congratulations Cecil on your win in pd's contest, have a lovely weekend....:)
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:40:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) on your awesome win, sure enjoyed.. have a wonderful one,..p.d.
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Date: 2/4/2011 7:17:00 PM
I really liked this one. Congratulations Cecil. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness and rhyming in this double entry.
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:41:00 AM
Hi Cecil - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in SKAT'S contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:22:00 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Cecil. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:13:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, cecil
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Date: 2/4/2011 8:39:00 AM
Good one! Cecil. Many congrats on your well deserved win. Lainie
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:53:00 AM
Congrats Cecil on your winning poem in Irma's contest with this wonderful write my friend.. enjoy another sweet victory with luv..
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:51:00 AM
Wonderful set of poems. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Most excellent writing. Best wishes. Deb
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Date: 2/4/2011 1:03:00 AM
CECIL~Congratulations on your win~ thanks for the support* Skat
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Date: 1/21/2011 6:49:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us Cecil. I enjoyed reading it today. May you have a wonderful weekend and always find inspiration to continue your writing. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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