Flaw Or Flawless That Is the Question

FLAWS

I once stopped to pause

and think of my flaws

     But I already knew

     That I had very few

So I gave myself a round of applause!



          FLAWLESS

I got no chance to be Flawless it's true

My wife says my Flaws are but two

     I asked "What are they my Dear?"

     Then she said loud and clear

"All that you say and all that you do!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 5:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement Ralph, in the contest "Flawless vs' Flaws" sponsored by SKAT*. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 3:47 PM
LOVE IT, Ralph. Except for missing a few syllables, the meter was great and the whole story was really funny. A GREAT winner. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
Guzzi Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 1:22 PM
Tough wife there! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Fraser Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 4:28 AM
Many congratulations Ralph on your win in pd's contest, have a lovely weekend....:)
A   Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 10:26 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) Ralph~on your awesome win, sure enjoyed.. have a wonderful one,..p.d.
Johnson Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 6:49 PM
Great one Ralph.lCongratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Kendrick Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 4:29 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
Pettit Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 4:17 PM
A couple of great limericks here. Congratulations on your win.
Richards Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 12:06 PM
So glad to see your poem in the winners' circle,!! Congratulations! love Carrie
Calhoun Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 11:20 AM
Hi Ralph - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in SKAT'S contest. Best wishes, KC
Mehta Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 10:00 AM
Congratulations on nthe third place win in the contest, Ralph
George   Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 8:13 AM
lol! Awesome! Congrat's on your big well deserved win, Ralph. Lainie
Sweetheart Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 6:34 AM
Congrats Ralph on your winning poem in Irma's contest with this wonderful write my friend.. enjoy your top spot with luv..
Radke Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 6:23 AM
Oh, wonderful limerick. I love this one. Congratulations on your winning score in the contest. Best wishes. Deb
A  Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 11:48 PM
Congratulations on your win, RALPH THANKS FOR THE SUPPORT~SKAT
Loving Iii Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 6:37 AM
hahahahahahahah that's a good one. jhl
Sweetheart Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 6:22 AM
Super good Limericks Ralph for this awesome contest ... great rhymes on both and great points made luv.. good luck int he contest...
Brown Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 4:40 AM
I am reading such amazing poetry this morning Ralph. I am glad yours is among the ones I have had the pleasure to read today. I wish you a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Locksley Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 7:50 PM
Hey, you write great limericks, Ralph! I predict you have a winner here. Best to you, Diane
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 7:29 PM
Love the twist ending of both of these, funny!! Luv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 5:56 PM
Very witty and humorous as always, Ralph
Devonshire Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 4:48 PM
Hah!! Two terrific limericks, Ralph. Can always count on you for some great laughs. Best wishes in the flaws contest. Best entry I've read so far. Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 3:59 PM
Good one..Reads like winning material..Sara
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