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Zipline is fine And fun when done Hold tight with might Intense suspense Keep eyes toward skies Look down and frown It hops treetops To fall you’ll bawl Moves fast— a blast Though great can’t wait For feet to meet On sound firm ground! June 5, 2015 Contest: Footle-Me Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Jan Allison

Date: 1/1/2021 3:49:00 PM

so good to read these again, Many congrats on your win and Happy New year Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/30/2020 1:07:00 PM

I am surprised this one did not place higher. You did fantastic,Sandra. Best wishes for the new year and belated congrats on your footles.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 12/24/2020 8:03:00 PM

I like this very much, Sandra. My feelings expressed without ever ziplining myself. Congrats.

Viv Wigley

Date: 6/12/2015 1:03:00 AM

Thanks for keeping me in suspense, Sandra. Well done. Viv x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2015 11:14:00 PM

Sandra, you are someone who really knows how to do this well in the "story format". Grammatical, interesting and well rhymed. If it were my contest, it would probably be a PURE number one win!

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/11/2015 3:56:00 PM

nice adventure!!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/11/2015 2:54:00 PM

Great fun write Sandra:-)Congratulations :-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 6/11/2015 2:51:00 PM

Sandra :) Congratulations on your FIVE FABULOUS FUNNY FOOTLES. hugs **SKAT**

Sneha Rv

Date: 6/11/2015 4:02:00 AM

This is awsome!! All the best in the contest!! :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/8/2015 1:18:00 AM

Sandra, i don't know yet my subject on this but certainly I love what you picked!!! I want to try this soon! ~olive eloisa

Sandra Haight
Date: 6/9/2015 7:12:00 PM

Thank you, Olive! These are a lot of fun to work on! I appreciate your positive comment! Hugs, Sandra

Constance La France

Date: 6/6/2015 1:40:00 AM

Sandra, these are great, big 7 and thanks for visiting my comic character poem

Sandra Haight
Date: 6/9/2015 7:15:00 PM

Thanks, BW. Footles are fun to work with! Thank you again for your much appreciated support. Hugs, Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/5/2015 5:20:00 PM

- Great footles, Sandra !!! :))) - Good luck in contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight
Date: 6/9/2015 7:16:00 PM

Hi Anne Lise, thanks so much for your visits and positive comments! Hugs, Sandra