Sandra Haight Poet Footle

Notes About The Poem

Contest: Footle-Me
Sponsor: Brian Strand

The Zipline

Zipline
  is fine

And fun
   when done

Hold tight
   with might

Intense
   suspense

Keep eyes
   toward skies

Look down
   and frown

It hops
   treetops

To fall
   you’ll bawl

Moves fast—
   a blast

Though great
   can’t wait

For feet
   to meet

On sound
   firm ground!

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Jan Allison January 1, 2021 at 3:49 PM so good to read these again, Many congrats on your win and Happy New year Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich December 30, 2020 at 1:07 PM I am surprised this one did not place higher. You did fantastic,Sandra. Best wishes for the new year and belated congrats on your footles.

Reason A. Poteet December 24, 2020 at 8:03 PM I like this very much, Sandra. My feelings expressed without ever ziplining myself. Congrats.

Viv Wigley June 12, 2015 at 1:03 AM Thanks for keeping me in suspense, Sandra. Well done. Viv x

Andrea Dietrich June 11, 2015 at 11:14 PM Sandra, you are someone who really knows how to do this well in the "story format". Grammatical, interesting and well rhymed. If it were my contest, it would probably be a PURE number one win!

Casarah Nance June 11, 2015 at 3:56 PM nice adventure!!

Jan Allison June 11, 2015 at 2:54 PM Great fun write Sandra:-)Congratulations :-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A June 11, 2015 at 2:51 PM Sandra :) Congratulations on your FIVE FABULOUS FUNNY FOOTLES. hugs **SKAT**

Sneha Rv June 11, 2015 at 4:02 AM This is awsome!! All the best in the contest!! :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 8, 2015 at 1:18 AM Sandra, i don't know yet my subject on this but certainly I love what you picked!!! I want to try this soon! ~olive eloisa Sandra Haight June 9, 2015 at 7:12 PM Thank you, Olive! These are a lot of fun to work on! I appreciate your positive comment! Hugs, Sandra

Constance La France June 6, 2015 at 1:40 AM Sandra, these are great, big 7 and thanks for visiting my comic character poem Sandra Haight June 9, 2015 at 7:15 PM Thanks, BW. Footles are fun to work with! Thank you again for your much appreciated support. Hugs, Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen June 5, 2015 at 5:20 PM - Great footles, Sandra !!! :))) - Good luck in contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sandra Haight June 9, 2015 at 7:16 PM Hi Anne Lise, thanks so much for your visits and positive comments! Hugs, Sandra