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clouds sail across the sky- my life weather-stained with years the drums of time slowed now my cane clicks on the path as I walk to my favorite park bench by the river's edge where ducks drift in serenity the quiet is disturbed suddenly by the roar of a motorcycle and a couple come to sit on a bench not far from me he is no typical teenager for sure a black leather jacket and a bad boy look so he says, "what do you like to do?" the girl is young and just blushes I could tell this was a first date he leans over for a kiss and she turns away he says, "your hair is so pretty" (I look) her hair is a flowing river she seems awkward and shy unsure of this wild boy suddenly he says " we should take a trip!" "a trip? where? she seems scared "yeah, we could go down to Daytona Beach" her eyes look at me wild and I could not help myself and spoke up "go home little girl to your parents" they both seem shocked that I spoke he mutters, "noisy old lady!" then, he jumps up and yells "forget it!" and roars away on his bike in anger the girl sits for a time then smiles at me and leaves . . . ___________________ August 16, 2017 Free Verse/First Date Copyright Protected, ID 930137 Written for the contest, First Date sponsor, Kim Rodriques Second Place

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Date: 8/20/2017 10:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win , Broken Wings. Beautiful descriptive write.
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Date: 8/18/2017 2:08:00 PM
I LOVE this, Constance. Congrats on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Date: 8/18/2017 1:15:00 PM
What a fabulous descriptive story you penned Constance congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/18/2017 9:26:00 AM
well done on this one, Constance... so much better than.....
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Date: 8/18/2017 8:45:00 AM
He was obviously not looking for love, just a fling. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/17/2017 10:34:00 AM
Nice! :) xomo
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Date: 8/17/2017 4:38:00 AM
Excellent write Constance! I surely loved reading this exceptional poem this morning! You have delighted me by your "First Date" poem, it was so spectacular I read it several times and was enthralled each time, Great story line! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 8/16/2017 5:41:00 PM
excellent write, a very visual poem, at least you didn't have to hit him with your cane
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