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First Class Love

As I awoke, eyes still laden, dreaming of a pretty maiden. Laying quietly, still in my bed. It was real not just in my head. As the light streaked through the window, heart beating like a crescendo. I felt the joy of love at last, in this love, I’ll willingly bask. The sharing, caring, and daring. The glancing and trance like starring. The thought came to me, will it last? Nothing to compare in my past. I’m at my best when with this lass, this kind of love must be first class.

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Date: 6/9/2022 8:39:00 PM
A lucky woman, and a lucky man! Love, Love, more love...please! Anaya
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Bill Baker
Date: 6/10/2022 8:34:00 AM
Thanks, Anaya. It's eternal, we can't help it! Bill & Sara Poets and writers in Texas. :-)
Date: 6/6/2022 8:40:00 AM
Your lass is first class - you are a couple in love, a loving, caring duo, a blast from the past that will forever last - well penned my friend.. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Bill Baker
Date: 6/6/2022 4:45:00 PM
Yep, blessed and very lucky. Thanks for the comment, Jennifer. :-) Hugs, Bill
Date: 6/2/2022 11:31:00 AM
Bill I would call this a first class sonnet on the love between a man and women.
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Bill Baker
Date: 6/3/2022 7:50:00 AM
Thanks for your kind comments, Kenneth. Have a great weekend! Bill
Date: 6/2/2022 10:18:00 AM
You must be a single man to write this. I consider my love for my husband to be first class.
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Bill Baker
Date: 6/3/2022 7:52:00 AM
Married thirty-nine years to my soulmate, Sara. Poem about when I was young though, you're right. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
Date: 6/2/2022 3:48:00 AM
Nicely invoked moments of love, Bill--sweet dream, indeed! Ephemeral-- yet heavenly while it lasts.
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Bill Baker
Date: 6/3/2022 7:53:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay. I Hope your week is going well. Have a great weekend my friend, Bill
Date: 6/2/2022 3:28:00 AM
nothing like finding and experiencing true love--what an expression of timelessness and a gift so rare! xoxo
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Date: 6/3/2022 7:54:00 AM
I agree, Sara. It is timeless / for an eternity. Bill
Date: 6/2/2022 1:05:00 AM
Sure beats 'first class postage!' Yours is what they used to call 'Special Delivery!' Peace, Gershon
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Bill Baker
Date: 6/3/2022 7:56:00 AM
Special Delivery for sure, my friend. Thanks for the witty comment. :-) Bill

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