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With dusk fall, fireworks began capturing the eyes Shooting spears rose high shedding fluorescent hues Etched scintillating designs on the panoramic sky Confetti of sparks in rainbow colours were sprinkled high All eyes were riveted up, feasting on the wondrous array The crowd stood aghast at the pyrotechnic display July.8.2022 ~ Placed Fifth~ Brian's Contest Bite size poem. 48. Poetry Contest Sponsor – Line Gauthier

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Sotto Poet

Date: 2/14/2023 11:39:00 AM

Back with congratulation on your win, dear Valsa! This was one that I found to be really enjoyable.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/14/2023 10:09:00 AM

I see them clearly Valsa with excitement in my eyes! Congratulations on your win! :)

Jcb Brul

Date: 2/14/2023 9:22:00 AM

Spectacularly divine!!! Congratulations on your win!! Stay creative dear friend.

Bill Baker

Date: 7/12/2022 1:17:00 PM

You painted an beautiful picture with your words and the imagery was up to your excellent stardard. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, Valsa. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/12/2022 3:40:00 AM

You have an exquisite way of writing;when I read your work I know it is from your heart and no one else's.

Michael Tor

Date: 7/8/2022 9:34:00 PM

Valsa the imagery in your words put me there to enjoy the splendor of watching this explosive show of lights and sounds in the sky. God bless you...

Rico Leffanta

Date: 7/8/2022 6:56:00 PM

Well said! Fireworks are even more popular now because digital photography can not capture the colours! Aloha!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/8/2022 1:08:00 PM

Amazing how they can say ahhhh!! in unison. I enjoyed reading this contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/8/2022 9:40:00 AM

Your vocabulary is exquisite, especially like 'confetti of sparks' and 'shedding fluorescent hues' - brings to life the feeling of watching fireworks explode across the sky~

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/8/2022 6:50:00 AM

Valsa Your writing is brilliant and really well made, and the lines are amazing. Your poetry, my friend, is a glittering exhibition of the adorable public show of pyrotechnics and the delight of viewing fireworks. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/8/2022 5:57:00 AM

Joy of watching fireworks scintillates your poem my friend. Best to you, Valsa.

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 7/8/2022 1:09:00 AM

Lovey display of fireworks, dear Valsa. In Malta before the pandemic we always had plenty of fireworks in summer. Hugs.