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Fireworks, Merge With Me

Incandescence flows from the very core. To say, a handful of innocent dust, Transcending into giant stars that soar. In a jiffy I’m captured in the gust. Myriad of colours bring sky alive, Wanton eyes defeat coward ears, to feast Upon designs undrawn to time, that thrive To awaken passion in dormant beasts; Unraveled emotions set me aflame. Intellect admonishes a presage. Deaf to all voices who would dare to blame, I’m set to welcome the divine message. Placed 8 for contest 206 any form, any topic, max 12 lines - Brian Strand Total number of syllables: 120 10 syllables per line – 12 lines. Rhyme: abab cdcd efef

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Date: 9/20/2016 8:45:00 PM
Sweet Sunita, lovely and amazing flow :)congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 9/20/2016 9:48:00 PM
Thanks Laura for going through and the nice comment. Good luck to you in your endeavours. Love Sunita
Date: 9/19/2016 10:10:00 PM
Thanks Brian Strand for the placement. I missed the last competition it was meant for and got my luck here!:D Thanks again and congrats to all the winners! Regards Sunita UPD
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Date: 9/19/2016 2:08:00 PM
Congrats, Sunita. Well done! ...Fran
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Date: 9/19/2016 9:52:00 PM
Thanks for the read and nice comment. :) Reg Sunita
Date: 6/15/2016 1:01:00 AM
Great poem. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/15/2016 8:29:00 AM
Thanks a lot. I'm glad you liked it! :)
Date: 6/15/2016 12:29:00 AM
lovely poem Sunita........Seren
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/15/2016 8:28:00 AM
Thanks Seren for the nice words and for the kind advice on mail( I tried replying but could not validate...:( still getting used!)
Date: 6/14/2016 3:23:00 PM
very nice, Sunita.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/15/2016 8:30:00 AM
Thanks. This is encouraging. :)
Date: 6/14/2016 11:14:00 AM
Lovely........so deep!
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/14/2016 11:28:00 AM
Thanks. Congrats for the placements. You did really well!
Date: 6/13/2016 1:36:00 PM
Composed for the fireworks for me contest. But I missed it :( Anyway I wish to share it with you all.
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Julia Ward
Date: 7/18/2016 12:31:00 PM
The "Fireworks For Me" contest was mine. This is very good!

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