Sunita U.D Palawon Poet Quatrain

Fireworks, Merge With Me

Incandescence flows from the very core.
To say, a handful of innocent dust,
Transcending into giant stars that soar.
In a jiffy I’m captured in the gust.

Myriad of colours bring sky alive,
Wanton eyes defeat coward ears, to feast
Upon designs undrawn to time, that thrive
To awaken passion in dormant beasts;

Unraveled emotions set me aflame.
Intellect admonishes a presage.
Deaf to all voices who would dare to blame,
I’m set to welcome the divine message.




Placed 8 for contest 206 any form, any topic, max 12 lines - Brian Strand
Total number of syllables: 120
10 syllables per line – 12 lines.
Rhyme: abab cdcd efef

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Beautiful Scars September 20, 2016 at 8:45 PM Sweet Sunita, lovely and amazing flow :)congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo Sunita U.D Palawon September 20, 2016 at 9:48 PM Thanks Laura for going through and the nice comment. Good luck to you in your endeavours. Love Sunita

Sunita U.D Palawon September 19, 2016 at 10:10 PM Thanks Brian Strand for the placement. I missed the last competition it was meant for and got my luck here!:D Thanks again and congrats to all the winners! Regards Sunita UPD

Francis J Grasso September 19, 2016 at 2:08 PM Congrats, Sunita. Well done! ...Fran Sunita U.D Palawon September 19, 2016 at 9:52 PM Thanks for the read and nice comment. :) Reg Sunita

Ravi Sathasivam June 15, 2016 at 1:01 AM Great poem. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Sunita U.D Palawon June 15, 2016 at 8:29 AM Thanks a lot. I'm glad you liked it! :)

Seren Roberts June 15, 2016 at 12:29 AM lovely poem Sunita........Seren Sunita U.D Palawon June 15, 2016 at 8:28 AM Thanks Seren for the nice words and for the kind advice on mail( I tried replying but could not validate...:( still getting used!)

Andrea Dietrich June 14, 2016 at 3:23 PM very nice, Sunita. Sunita U.D Palawon June 15, 2016 at 8:30 AM Thanks. This is encouraging. :)

Anoucheka Gangabissoon June 14, 2016 at 11:14 AM Lovely........so deep! Sunita U.D Palawon June 14, 2016 at 11:28 AM Thanks. Congrats for the placements. You did really well!

Sunita U.D Palawon June 13, 2016 at 1:36 PM Composed for the fireworks for me contest. But I missed it :( Anyway I wish to share it with you all. Julia Ward July 18, 2016 at 12:31 PM The "Fireworks For Me" contest was mine. This is very good!