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Finishing the Dream

As I tried to pull her along with me and our eyes started adjusting to the darkness, we realized that she was not suffering from some sort of paralysis. Instead, a pair of large harry hands protruded through the sidewalk and were each wrapped around one of her ankles. I am not sure why, but I unzipped my pants and started to urinate on the hands. “What are you doing”, cried my girlfriend, full of fear. “Our urine is like acid on their skins”, I answered, not really sure how I knew this. She stared at me with a quizzical look on her face as if she, too, was afraid to ask how I knew that – fearful of what my answer might be. As the skin burned off the large hands, my girlfriend was able to step free and we started running down the darkened city street. Off in the distance was a barely perceivable blinking red light marking the destination I was heading for. Even though it felt like we were running in place and in slow motion, the red light grew larger and larger with each lethargic step. Finally, we reached our destination. It looked like a domed baseball stadium hovering five feet off the ground. I approached a door-like structure and yelled, “Permission to enter the ship” – only the sounds that came out of my mouth were strange bleeps and blips. “No humans allowed”, boomed from the spaceship in the same bleeping language that I had just used. “It’s okay – she’s with me”, I responded. My girlfriend took a step back, stared at me with terror in her eyes – eyes that then rolled back as she started to fall in a faint. Just in time, I stepped toward her and grabbed her before she crashed onto the ground. Her weight and momentum took me down with her in a soft landing with me cushioning her fall. It was then that I awoke to find my girlfriend on top of me having somehow aroused me enough to be pleasuring her in my sleep. "Oh, you feel so good", she moaned ...only, it came out in bleeps and blips.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/25/2011 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place, Joe! I have enjoyed reading your awesome narrative. Keep up the great work, and may you have many more wins. Have a wonderful day. Peace and Love, Andrew.
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Date: 2/25/2011 7:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win Joe in Matt's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2011 6:48:00 AM
Congrats Joe on your first place win in Finish the Dream contest.. super cool luv..
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Date: 2/24/2011 12:33:00 AM
a rare treasure, joe! REAL TOPPER! congrats with huggs..:) nette
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Date: 2/23/2011 10:20:00 PM
How imaginative! Joe, no wonder you took first place with this great entry. Congratulations to you.
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Date: 2/23/2011 10:04:00 PM
wow, what a clever dream this was! Congratulation on your win!
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Date: 2/23/2011 7:48:00 PM
Some awesome work full of laughs and a super end. many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 2/23/2011 6:02:00 PM
Congratualtions on your win~~
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Date: 2/23/2011 4:06:00 PM
Wow...a great job, Joe!! Great imaginary dream!! Congratulations on your win!!
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Date: 2/23/2011 3:53:00 PM
Wow! What a fantastic story Joe. Many congrat's on your well deserved first place win. lainie
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Date: 2/23/2011 11:55:00 AM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of John, Joe
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Date: 2/23/2011 10:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win in the contest, Joe! Ist Place, well deserving! Truly enjoyed. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/23/2011 10:01:00 AM
yike,,a real roller coaster ride like some dreams are one minute OK next nightmare ville! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/23/2011 9:49:00 AM
An eerie dream and a well told story. Congratulations on your big no. 1, Joe. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/5/2011 6:23:00 PM
(Still laughing at Joe I's remark below.) You are sooo creative, Joe. This is like a combination of sci-fi thrillers and "Nightmare on Elm Street." Got a kick out of the way you burnt the hands holding your girlfriend back. And your ending is priceless! Top-notch Flach work. Love it, Joe. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn
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Date: 2/5/2011 4:03:00 PM
Well thats exactly why I never sleep on my stomach lol
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Date: 2/5/2011 2:31:00 PM
wow this is such a interesting dream, love it and it's details, enjoyed your write Joe,..p.d.
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