Kp Nunez Poet Limerick

Fifty Heads of Gray

There once was a black hip named Kool
who kept fifty two bags of wool:
Black from the master,
blond from his sister
and gray from now fifty bald ghouls.




27 April 2015
Limerick Contest
Sponsor : Jan Allison

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Afolabi Muideen October 9, 2015 at 6:44 AM What an awesome win KIM with this very funny piece. Congratulations dear poet...love always............A.M.

Richard Lamoureux May 4, 2015 at 8:21 AM Congratulations on your win Kim.

Elaine George May 3, 2015 at 4:53 PM lol!!!! Good one, Kim. Many congrats on your well deserved win. Elaine

Joseph May April 30, 2015 at 9:09 PM lol...congrats on your win Kim

Casarah Nance April 30, 2015 at 5:52 PM Lol grats on your win ;)

Bl Devnath April 30, 2015 at 12:11 PM Excellent bald cool after fifty. Wonderfully done. Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Noel Villarosa April 30, 2015 at 12:30 AM Great win, Kim. Very entertaining reading your limerick story. Congratulations. (^_^) Noel.

Nandita Das April 29, 2015 at 11:52 PM I knew this Fifty heads of gray would win. Great limerick. Congratulations on win.

Andrea Dietrich April 29, 2015 at 11:39 PM Glad to see this one again. Congrats on your win, sweetie.

Constance La France April 29, 2015 at 8:36 PM Kim, congrats on your placement in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, turn it off

Jack Ellison April 29, 2015 at 8:25 PM We did okay eh Kimmie! My first contest... how about you? I MAY enter more... not sure! Like your sign of, "hugs and smiles" May I use it? Love, Jackson xxx

Skat A April 29, 2015 at 5:20 PM KIM, Congratulations...... SKAT LOVE

Poet Destroyer A April 29, 2015 at 5:00 PM Kim, Congratulations on your awesome Limerick Win.... LINDA

Jan Allison April 29, 2015 at 4:18 PM I was expecting something totally different from the title Kim! Congrats on your 4th place in my first contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud April 29, 2015 at 2:58 PM now you have me in stitches, kim... a real fun limerick.. yeahhh!.. huggs

Rochelle Harris April 29, 2015 at 12:10 PM this is a funny one- thanks Kim laughter is ALWAYS the best medicine

Andrea Dietrich April 28, 2015 at 5:13 PM cute take on the 50 shades theme,Kim!

Maurice Yvonne April 28, 2015 at 10:35 AM Great lime Ricky good luck in Jan's contest.

Laura Breidenthal April 28, 2015 at 1:31 AM Nice one!!! Haha Very cute limerick. Always, Laura

Arthur Vaso April 27, 2015 at 10:50 PM I agree, I am smiling too!!!!! :)

Etienne Lariviere April 27, 2015 at 2:54 PM You have made me sourire !!

Emile Pinet April 27, 2015 at 1:28 PM I can tell you enjoy a good chuckle...Good for you! Emile.

Constance La France April 27, 2015 at 1:26 PM Kim, good one for the contest, best of luck and thanks for visiting my poem, I play. . .

Carolyn Devonshire April 27, 2015 at 1:00 PM LOL Having fifty shades of color in my own hear, he could have looked no further and would up with a colorful display. Very funny! Best wishes in Jan's great contest. I'm reading some terrific entries. Love, Carolyn

Nandita Das April 27, 2015 at 5:52 AM Wow. What a punchline!!! Brilliant. A #7. Great one for the contest.

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