Fifty Heads of Gray

There once was a black hip named Kool
who kept fifty two bags of wool:
Black from the master,
blond from his sister
and gray from now fifty bald ghouls.




27 April 2015
Limerick Contest
Sponsor : Jan Allison

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/9/2015 6:44:00 AM
What an awesome win KIM with this very funny piece. Congratulations dear poet...love always............A.M.
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Date: 5/4/2015 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Kim.
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Date: 5/3/2015 4:53:00 PM
lol!!!! Good one, Kim. Many congrats on your well deserved win. Elaine
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Date: 4/30/2015 9:09:00 PM
lol...congrats on your win Kim
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Date: 4/30/2015 5:52:00 PM
Lol grats on your win ;)
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Date: 4/30/2015 12:11:00 PM
Excellent bald cool after fifty. Wonderfully done. Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 4/30/2015 12:30:00 AM
Great win, Kim. Very entertaining reading your limerick story. Congratulations. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 4/29/2015 11:52:00 PM
I knew this Fifty heads of gray would win. Great limerick. Congratulations on win.
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Date: 4/29/2015 11:39:00 PM
Glad to see this one again. Congrats on your win, sweetie.
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Date: 4/29/2015 8:36:00 PM
Kim, congrats on your placement in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, turn it off
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Date: 4/29/2015 8:25:00 PM
We did okay eh Kimmie! My first contest... how about you? I MAY enter more... not sure! Like your sign of, "hugs and smiles" May I use it? Love, Jackson xxx
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Date: 4/29/2015 5:20:00 PM
KIM, Congratulations...... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 4/29/2015 5:00:00 PM
Kim, Congratulations on your awesome Limerick Win.... LINDA
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Date: 4/29/2015 4:18:00 PM
I was expecting something totally different from the title Kim! Congrats on your 4th place in my first contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/29/2015 2:58:00 PM
now you have me in stitches, kim... a real fun limerick.. yeahhh!.. huggs
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Date: 4/29/2015 12:10:00 PM
this is a funny one- thanks Kim laughter is ALWAYS the best medicine
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Date: 4/28/2015 5:13:00 PM
cute take on the 50 shades theme,Kim!
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Date: 4/28/2015 10:35:00 AM
Great lime Ricky good luck in Jan's contest.
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Date: 4/28/2015 1:31:00 AM
Nice one!!! Haha Very cute limerick. Always, Laura
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Date: 4/27/2015 10:50:00 PM
I agree, I am smiling too!!!!! :)
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Date: 4/27/2015 2:54:00 PM
You have made me sourire !!
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Date: 4/27/2015 1:28:00 PM
I can tell you enjoy a good chuckle...Good for you! Emile.
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Date: 4/27/2015 1:26:00 PM
Kim, good one for the contest, best of luck and thanks for visiting my poem, I play. . .
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Date: 4/27/2015 1:00:00 PM
LOL Having fifty shades of color in my own hear, he could have looked no further and would up with a colorful display. Very funny! Best wishes in Jan's great contest. I'm reading some terrific entries. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/27/2015 5:52:00 AM
Wow. What a punchline!!! Brilliant. A #7. Great one for the contest.
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