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Feelings

Here I go again, attempting to define a feeling not one less evasive than another were they only calm enough less transient than their blood inspired timed by pulse though temperature more aptly a flux of colliding dark and light that unseen spirit animating attracting and dividing navigates a mind-course no less explosive than those exposed fields of war armored warriors cross nimble and cautious like a ballerina on tip-toes

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Date: 11/29/2022 3:01:00 PM
you do a good job of defining feelings. I love "nimble and cautious, like a ballerina on tip-toes."
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Joe Dimino
Date: 11/29/2022 3:39:00 PM
Hi Ann; thank you. I don't know where that one came from, but when it popped into my mind during writing I immediately thought, this is a definite keeper. Blessings my friend.
Date: 11/22/2022 12:10:00 PM
Feelings can turn our life around, explosive one moment and subdued the next, you write it so well, and so detailed, you are so full of understanding Joe :)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 11/22/2022 2:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Rose; you made my day. Blessings!
Date: 11/22/2022 7:16:00 AM
Vivid visual Joe.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 11/22/2022 7:17:00 AM
Thank you, Vickey; have a great day! Blessings.

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